Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
I grew up in a small town and then moved to a big city. I didn't think I would like living here, but I was wrong. I think life is much better in a big city, Transportation is much more convenient, everything is more exciting, and there is a greater variety of people. I can't imagine ever living in a small town again.
Transportation is easier in a city. In a small town, you have to have a car to get around because there isn't any kind of public transportation. In a city, on the other hand, there are usually buses and taxis, and some cities have subways. Cities often have heavy traffic and expensive parking, but it doesn't matter because you can always take the bus. Using public transportation is usually cheaper and more convenient than
driving a car, but you don't have this choice in a small town.
City life is more exciting than small town life. In small towns usually nothing changes. You see the same people every day, you go to the same two or three restaurants, everything is the same. In a city things change all the time. You see new people everyday. There are many restaurants, with new ones to choose from all the time. New plays come to the theaters and new musicians come to the concert halls.
Cities have a diversity of people that you don't find in a small town. There are much fewer people in a small town and usually they are all alike. In a city you can find people from different countries, of different religions, of different races-you can find all kinds of people. This variety of people is what makes city life interesting.
Life in a city is convenient, exciting, and interesting. After experiencing city life, I could never live in a small town again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ll town and then moved to a big city. I didnt think I would like living here, but I w...
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Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ould like living here, but I was wrong. I think life is much better in a big city...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...d there is a greater variety of people. I cant imagine ever living in a small tow...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...there is a greater variety of people. I cant imagine ever living in a small town aga...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
... have a car to get around because there isnt any kind of public transportation. In a...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...y traffic and expensive parking, but it doesnt matter because you can always take the ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...convenient than driving a car, but you dont have this choice in a small town. City...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...ants, everything is the same. In a city things change all the time. You see new people...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...change all the time. You see new people everyday. There are many restaurants, with new o...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ies have a diversity of people that you dont find in a small town. There are much fe...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'so', 'then', 'i think', 'kind of', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.224137931034 0.229887763892 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.146551724138 0.158761421928 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.112068965517 0.0866891130778 129% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0632183908046 0.046263068375 137% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0488505747126 0.0685040099705 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0890804597701 0.118717715034 75% => OK
Participles: 0.014367816092 0.0351676179071 41% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.58251414749 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0201149425287 0.0309702414327 65% => OK
Particles: 0.00287356321839 0.00188951952338 152% => OK
Determiners: 0.0977011494253 0.0887237588012 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.014367816092 0.0209618222197 69% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00287356321839 0.0139019557991 21% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1682.0 2387.08602151 70% => OK
No of words: 308.0 408.028673835 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46103896104 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.48200974243 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.25 0.338922669872 74% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.155844155844 0.251872472559 62% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.100649350649 0.174417080927 58% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0844155844156 0.112833075102 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58251414749 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457792207792 0.524397521467 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.8267682157 59.2087087015 76% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5533526081 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2177337909 48.84282405 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4545454545 120.699889404 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.5533526081 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.318181818182 0.644075263715 49% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.54480286738 180% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 29.5844155844 45.7405998639 65% => OK
Elegance: 1.26666666667 1.45489161554 87% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32352273025 0.300154397459 108% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117797121719 0.103427244359 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0995915801554 0.0752933317313 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.500098269348 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.188254649999 0.151897553556 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11860816378 0.114077575197 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067719070904 0.0781384742642 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.207655415894 0.336927656856 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0597354774407 0.067059652881 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189930527453 0.210909579961 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032546167322 0.0618886996521 53% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.91756272401 264% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 8.42114695341 47% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.