Some people prefer to live in small town Others prefer to live in a big city Which place would you prefer to live in Use specific reasons and details to support your answer

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Some people prefer to live in small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Choosing where to live is a controversial debate. While some prefer to live in a big city , others like to inhabit in a small town . Personally, I think that living in a modern city is better than living in the rural due to some reasons , which I will explore in the following essay .

To begin with, living in a big city is convenience . As a matter of fact, services in city offers local people many advantages , especially transpotation . Indeed , there are many vehicles, which are suitable for each classes in the society like cars, buses , submarines … . Thus , the dweller can choose which one is suitable for them in their daily life . More importantly, the demand for living is fully met in a neighborhood in the city . For example , I have lived in Sydney for a long time ; it seems to me that the life here is very comfortable thanks to the good services . In other words , it takes me five minutes to go to a mall near my house , which have supermarkets , the restaurants, cinemas ,… . All of them makes my living at Sydney more convenient than living in a rural country . Thus , living in a big city offers the dweller many convenience in their daily life .

In addition , many opportunities is provided in a big city . As a matter of fact , people have a variety choice of choosing school in a big city . And most of them are one of the most famous university in the country, even in the world . More significanltly, many big companies is located in a big city. For example , my brother had to move to California in United States to work for Facebook company after graduating in the rural . He said that his job was quite interesting , and his wage was out of his expectation thanks to his assiduousness . All in all , living in a big city means the future of ones is opened .

In conclusion , there is no doubt that living in a big city gives more advantages than living in the countryside due to its convenience and offering lots of opportunities for inhabitants . As a result, it is clear that more and more people are moving to the cities to have a comfortable life .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a matter of fact, as a result, in other words, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 373.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53351206434 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7566597743 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461126005362 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0692239146 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5238095238 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7619047619 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.5376344086 722% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263590800833 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913761549945 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921340977956 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193557405664 0.150856017488 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122894152536 0.0645574589148 190% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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