Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
There are a substantial number of people who are of the opinion that living in a big city is better than living in a small one while others have an opposite opinion. Although both cases have their merits and drawbacks, I personally prefer to live in a big city. The following reasons will aptly elucidate my perspective.
First and foremost, living in a big city provide occupation opportunities Because there are a lot of job vacancies in big city. According to nation survey, a huge number of people migrate from small city to bigger one yearly to find better job and increase their salary. For example, I did not find job after graduation when I was in a small town, so I migrate to Tehran (capital of Iran) and immediately found suitable job that fitted with my education. Also, my income was not comparable with income in the former city.
Another reason is there are variety of hi-tech facilities in big cities whether entertainment facilities or healthcare ones. People can use the best amenities in the big city while they might not have the same one in the small one. For instance, one can imagine the situation in which a disaster would be occurred in a big city. Consequently, people could get receive treatment faster than in the small city. Therefore, I think the life in a big city is more convenient that a small town.
The last reason I would like to say is about the excitement there is in big cities. Life is boring if every day one confront the same subject and this is not happened in the big cities. I prefer the capital of my country due to the amount of challenge that there is in every day of my life.
All in all, living in a big city or the country has its advantage and disadvantage and people choose to live in which one based on their personal characteristics. I prefer to live in a big city due to its ample amenities.
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- TPO 48 - Integrated Writing Task 80
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- TPO 35- Task 1 3
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 267, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
...o the amount of challenge that there is in every day of my life. All in all, living in a ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, if, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52818991098 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63165101942 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474777448071 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5530377325 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7647058824 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8235294118 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32391429338 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107652419887 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772924982879 0.0737576698707 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192288815749 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865902451777 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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