Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Many people do not like to live in a big city because it may be polluted and noisy. In my opinion, however, I prefer to live in a big city because of several reasons such as good medical care, many kinds of entertainment and the opportunity to get a high-salary job.
First of all, a big city usually have a good medical care system. Many big hospitals have been built in the city to take care of people’s health. Also, these hospitals may have many ambulance cars so that can deliver wealth or sick people in emergency situations. In addition, new treatment methods and modern equipment with new technologies enable hospitals to cure many dangerous diseases.
Secondly, many interesting places with a lot of kinds of entertainment allow people to relax after working hard. Take cinema as an example for this. I usually go to see new films on every Friday. I can relax after lecture time at university. Also, I can hang out with my friends by going camping at a park in the city so that I can spend time talking with my friends and playing some outdoor activities.
Finally, when I live in a big city, I will have the opportunity to get a high-salary job. High educational quality is one attractive thing of a big city. I will have chances to study at a big university so that I can gain knowledge and accumulate experience. Things that I learn from university will help me prepare my best for future career, so I can succeed in the future.
In conclusion, the advances in medical care, entertainments and job opportunities compared with those in a small town. Therefore, life in a big city is more attractive me so much with its advantages. Though there are a lot of drawbacks of urban life, I think these drawbacks are outweighed by the advantages of the urban life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62776025237 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84568115973 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526813880126 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4028355435 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11111111111 5.45110844103 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139281430301 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437721338721 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532904216805 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805573792719 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676731736493 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 11.7677419355 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.