Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
According to some statistical data and researches there was a trend in which people wanted to move from rural parts to city areas in searching for prosperous life. Despite this obsolete tendency, I personally prefer to life in a small city and I will develop my ideas in the following paragraphs.
First, the equanimity that we will receive in a small city is absolutely irreplaceable. I bet that many urban living people crave for some quite ambience after a long and excruciating working day. No one can deny how bothering are noises from a daily traffic especially in the late afternoon when majority of the citizens leave their working places. I can give an example of my city situation during week times. Every single day around 17:00 pm the main boulevard is full with cabs and buses, which in turn contributes for dynamic situation. Therefore, I consider that by living in a small town we can stave off this unpleasant noises every single day. If the life in a big city had been more quite, that would have been preferable place to live in.
Furthermore, in big cities like Los Angeles the biggest problem might be congestion. When a person has to go to a particular destination and if he is on a hurry, the horrible traffic might be a obstacle. Sticking into a traffic jam in front of lights can cause serious consequences . For instance, if an ambulance has to drive swiftly a serious ill person to a nearest hospital and there is a congestion, this might let to deterioration of person's health or in the worst case death. In contrast, being in the a small city we can not face that sort of issues due to the less occupied streets and negligible amount of vehicles.
In conclusion I would say that the life in a village or small city have many benefits. As I mentioned there is no suffering from congestion and outdoor noises are not as much as in a cosmopolitan city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...of lights can cause serious consequences . For instance, if an ambulance has to dr...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...o drive swiftly a serious ill person to a nearest hospital and there is a congest...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...worst case death. In contrast, being in the a small city we can not face that sort of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61194029851 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75153115228 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576119402985 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4568910923 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5625 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215427456668 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643447430851 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718837614016 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116352090844 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750998869179 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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