Some people prefer to settle down and start a family in a rural area. Other people prefer the convenience of the big city. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
People based on their needs live in the rural or city areas. Young generation may need additional futures that rural does not supply them. So for some reasons people prefer to live in city. These are included facility, the education system and the job vacancy that urban areas have.
First of all, city areas have many facility in comparison with rural areas. People could access to many facilities like hospitals , shopping centers and many other places easily. In cities there are a number of hospitals which people could cure illness in advance. In contrast, In rural areas there are few hospitals and for some cases of there is not any cure equipment as a result they have to move to cities for the treatment. On the other hand, for existence of natural resources and clean weather people who settle down in rural areas feel healthier, so they enjoy their life.
Education system in the city is better than that of rural. There are many public and private schools and universities for higher education students. In addition, for lacks of post-secondary school, students must travel to the city for studying.
Finally, the educated people must commune every day to city which undergo additional expenses on the transportation and time on families. While many job vacancy exist in cities. and large companies headquarters are placed in urban places. Conversely, rural regions propose limited job vacancies which are farming and animal caring. Although living expenses in rural areas are much lower than cities, individuals will have higher salary in cities.
While rural areas have less crime quantities, cities provide many benefit to us. In my opinion one must live with his condition because people in some stage of life needs the cities facility. In conclusion, youngster will have good life in the things like better education system and job vacancy that cities supply them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 31, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun facility seems to be countable; consider using: 'many facilities'.
Suggestion: many facilities
...as have. First of all, city areas have many facility in comparison with rural areas. People ...
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Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...access to many facilities like hospitals , shopping centers and many other places ...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... are many public and private schools and universities for higher education studen...
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Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion students. In addition, for lacks of post-secondary school, students must tra...
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Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he transportation and time on families. While many job vacancy exist in cities. and ...
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Line 4, column 179, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...While many job vacancy exist in cities. and large companies headquarters are place...
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Line 4, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le many job vacancy exist in cities. and large companies headquarters are placed ...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'many benefits'.
Suggestion: many benefits
...e less crime quantities, cities provide many benefit to us. In my opinion one must live with...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
... people in some stage of life needs the cities facility. In conclusion, youngster will...
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Line 5, column 322, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd job vacancy that cities supply them.
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Discourse Markers used:
['conversely', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'while', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'as a result', 'first of all', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.316860465116 0.229887763892 138% => OK
Verbs: 0.116279069767 0.158761421928 73% => OK
Adjectives: 0.107558139535 0.0866891130778 124% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0232558139535 0.046263068375 50% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0261627906977 0.0685040099705 38% => OK
Prepositions: 0.142441860465 0.118717715034 120% => OK
Participles: 0.0145348837209 0.0351676179071 41% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.4270673288 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0203488372093 0.0309702414327 66% => OK
Particles: 0.00290697674419 0.00188951952338 154% => OK
Determiners: 0.0610465116279 0.0887237588012 69% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0232558139535 0.0209618222197 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0174418604651 0.0139019557991 125% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1890.0 2387.08602151 79% => OK
No of words: 312.0 408.028673835 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.05769230769 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355769230769 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.237179487179 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.147435897436 0.174417080927 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115384615385 0.112833075102 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4270673288 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522435897436 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 53.6203048672 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.6 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8692485463 48.84282405 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 120.699889404 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.5533526081 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.644075263715 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.54480286738 180% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 39.3179487179 45.7405998639 86% => OK
Elegance: 2.85964912281 1.45489161554 197% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355688091938 0.300154397459 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104455632563 0.103427244359 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0817350319601 0.0752933317313 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.493709184622 0.497263757937 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.10090580341 0.151897553556 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129548468564 0.114077575197 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752431531853 0.0781384742642 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.313858139324 0.336927656856 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0459319463458 0.067059652881 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230195137774 0.210909579961 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471082971919 0.0618886996521 76% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8870967742 42% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.91756272401 244% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 2.75985663082 326% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 13.6433691756 125% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.