Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use specific reasons to support your answer
Friends are persons who can influence our lives greatly since we spend a good deal of time with them, live with them, and share our secrets with them. Nowadays some people may hold the opinion that it would be better to be alone and not be with different friends as if it is a general truth. But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. I strongly believe that we should have a friend but somebody worthy who can make our life better for the following reasons.
Firstly, we can have fun together. We can go out with a friend to have dinner, go to see movies or even play games with them which all of these help us to be happier more than are now. For example, I and my friend, Hossein who has been my best friend since when I was a little boy, go to the beach every week. We talk concerning different aspects of our lives in a restaurant and then swim together. I have a lot of fun with him and I wait during the week for every weekend to go out with him. Also, friends know each other better since they are usually at the same ages. As you can see, a good friend can make you happier in many ways.
Secondly, a good friend can help me in tough situations. It is a well-known statement in my country that "Good friend is better than your siblings." Friends probably spend a lot of time together and are familiar with each other problems and can help each other. This is because they face the same problems which are connected them together. For instance, my friend, Ali, helped me on doing my university project when I was badly sick. I remember he did not sleep for all night to help me in my project. Therefore, a good friend can be very helpful to overcome your obstacles.
In contrast, there are some people which they called themselves your friend but they want to exploit from you actually. So, when people see such things in their relationships, they would prefer to be alone. Some friends are very talkative and take your time with worthless aspects to such an extent that you want to stop communicating with them. Also, some people are very boastful and do not pay attention to your demands. Consequently, there are some good reasons for some people that prefer to be alone.
In conclusion, although there are some negative conditions which may bring about that people want to be alone such as some bad experiences in their relationship with a friend, but I strongly believe that spending time with a friend is more worthy. Not only will they help you in bad conditions, but also you can have fun with them. Therefore, if I have a son, I definitely advise him to have a friend but not everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 15.1003584229 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41614906832 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41796242146 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438923395445 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7160917973 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.32 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.32 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370453759976 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109498086511 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853412437664 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237904976997 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818686853038 0.0645574589148 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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