Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In today's faced-paced and technology-oriented world, computers play a vital role in improving our lives as well as orienting our thoughts. Throughout the world, computers help people triumph over obstacles and achieve success. A controversial question regarding this issue is whether computer make people's lives easier and achievement a substantial useful things or otherwise. Some people believe that the computers bring about feeling better than in the past, and also create the world easier, whereas others disagree. I am of the opinion that; the more technology make progress, the more our lives become easier and creating it nice for the next generation for some reasons. In ensuing lines, I will address the most discernible reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that, computers lead to make progress science in terms of all field. In fact, by employing computer in science, the researchers could have done a huge thing that they could not be able to perform it before. For instance, in physics science that is my field of study, the scientists could not be able to calculate grand state and interaction between atoms and molecules more than two atom or just could solve Schrodinger equation that is the most important equation in Quantum physic, for simple systems. Therefore, by developing computers and utilizing in science, nowadays researchers could solve the equation for every system, as well as for many particles. As you can see, the computer would have made our lives very progressive and easier.
Another noteworthy aspect that should be reflected in this explanation is that, in today's state-of-the-art world, computers provoke our world unity. Needless to say, by developing internet the communication between people and community became more facilities than it was in the past. By the virtue of this, progressing social networks and websites, it is possible to be aware of everything that happening around us. To illustrate this, I would like to mention an earthquake that have recently occurred in my country. The news of this catastrophic earthquake informed everyone on the whole of the world about this event and caused sending to our country charity and helps such as medical, and other facilities things. This experience taught me that, the internet causes to unity our world, in other word, make it universal.
In light of these crucial reasons, I have strictly come to believe that computers make life too easy that we can make our world good place for next generation. Give the above, computers not only can make progress in science such as Physic, Chemistry, Mathematica, etc., but also can create communication in throughout the world and also make our world unity. That is why I believe that computer is the best creation of human being in over the history.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 357, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
...er and achievement a substantial useful things or otherwise. Some people believe that ...
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'atom' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'atoms'.
Suggestion: atoms
...tween atoms and molecules more than two atom or just could solve Schrodinger equatio...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, so, therefore, well, whereas, as for, for instance, in fact, such as, as well as, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2360.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 458.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15283842795 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81649571611 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517467248908 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 726.3 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 9.0 3.08781362007 291% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.94265232975 263% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1443915109 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198357613709 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656537244354 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518908233283 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118114603781 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441503370128 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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