Do you agree that people easily learn from the friends beside them? Use specific examples and evidences to support your answer.
In the fast-paced and technology-oriented world, friends play a vital role in people's lives and one can learn from his friend how to cope with problems as well as orienting his thoughts and aims. Throughout the history, friends help people triumph over obstacles and achieves success. A controversial question regarding this issue is whether a person learns correctly and precisely beside his or her friends and would have substantial progress or otherwise. Some people believe that if one can learn accurately and make progress in a short time, it is proper to study in front of his/her friends, whereas others have varied standpoints. I am of the opinion that; the most one has good friend and study together and more particularly if they are studying in the same field, the more can become prosperous for some reasons. In ensuing lines, I will address the most discernible grounds.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that the friend encourages us to study and learn more. In fact, when we put in an environment that everyone is studying we will induce to study more, especially when the individuals are our friends. As a case in point, there is a body of psychological research that I read recently. The researchers conducted an interview with many volunteer students in order to find information about the effect of friend in the study and learn in less time, the data denoted that a host of them had such experience that their studies had more efficient besides of their friends. On balance, this finding can partly explain why this experience and study beside of friends is intrinsic for becoming prosperous in a given study.
Another noteworthy aspect that should be reflected in this explanation is that friends can help each other to thrive in a study. Needless to say that when friends are at the same level and in a same field of study could share information and assist each other to flourish. In other words, they can with each other pave the way toward better future and performance in their lives. Take a personal experience as an example, back to university, I had a roommate and we were close friends; in the third semester, we took a difficult(drawback) course, Quantum Physics. therefore, after each class, we went to library and studied the portion of book related to the course and helped each other to figure out entirely. Moreover, if we had not grasped in the course, we would go to the professor and ask about the problem. Consequently, we could learn more straightforward and in short time subsequent we got a remarkable grade in the course.
In light of these crucial reasons, I have strictly come to believe that study in front of friends has many momentous profits. for sake of brevity, a couple of points are worth reiterating; firstly, when a friend is studying, you are inducing to study and learn more thing, it is sort of competition for success; secondly, friends can help each other to achieve their goal in a short time and share information. Albeit, it was a story in a nutshell; as a matter of fact, there are many reasonable grounds that can lend weight to my point of view.
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Suggestion: Therefore
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, well, whereas, in fact, in short, sort of, as a matter of fact, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2595.0 1977.66487455 131% => OK
No of words: 540.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80555555556 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82057051367 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.797080464 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501851851852 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 790.2 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.9655303698 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.571428571 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7142857143 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2380952381 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120941725642 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388764945445 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385311530476 0.0737576698707 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810064610941 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392757956662 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 86.8835125448 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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