Technology has changed a lot in our lives in recent few decades. Some people are ambivalent whether computers have a good impact on our life or the opposite. Personally, I think that computers have made our life much easier and more convenient. I feel this way because of two reasons that I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, without computers, our life will be difficult. Computers have increased the quality of many things. One of the most important things is the health setting. Healthcare professionals can access a lot of information because of the computers. They share the recent findings with the world, so they can learn from each other and improve the quality of life. Because of accessibility to the information, the diseases are treatable, which makes people live easier.
Secondly, computers have made our lives faster. A good compelling example is that doing my homework. Years ago my brother relied only on books, and he spent hours to find the information he wanted to solve the assignments. However, nowadays with computers, I can finish the work within an hour because of the tools that the computers have such as searching engine, Adobe programs, and searching about specific topics.
Frankly speaking, It is true that computers have made our life more complex and stressful, but let us imagine that there is no computer in front of me. This means I have to take the TOEFL by paper and pencil. Definitely, I would struggle with reading the handwriting, and the test makers have to read as well my handwriting which is very hard to read. Also, I would have to use pay for the test by cash, which people rarely use today because of the computers.
All in All, even though those computers could be stressful, but we could not live without them. Increasing the quality of life, making the information easily accessible, and depending on the computer in everything makes our life easier and more convenient.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, frankly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, i feel, i think, such as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 330.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90606060606 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69728462581 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554545454545 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2005907917 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.95 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35007697678 0.236089414692 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103853695492 0.076458572812 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106911174408 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19741078722 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699182511175 0.0645574589148 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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