Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful What is your opinion Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful.What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

people have different believe on how the invention of computers has brought to human's life. Some think it has made life to become more easier and convenient while others oppose this. I totally agree that computers have made life easier and more convenient because of the subsequent reasons.

First of all, Employees in the government offices and schools have had an easy time to do their tasks using computers. For instance , when one wants to compile the results in school he/her will just type them in the computer using excel and they are going to be arranged in ascending order or as required by the computer instead of you arranging. As a result, this one is more easier and convenient since is it will not have errors. Thus, the results obtain are pure with error free.

Secondly, computers preserve information for a longer period of time which would be disastrous to hiumans. this has given human easier and more convenient time to work on many tasks within a short period of time . For example, many students can be registered in a university within a day and with a lot of informations and the computer is going to keep those personal information for a long time as compared to human's work and brain which gets exhausted within 24 hours.

To recapitulate. computers preserve informations for a longer period of time an also arrange things in an orderly manners and these advantages have made life more convenient making a plethora of people to forget about its repercussions.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1977.66487455 63% => OK
No of words: 255.0 407.700716846 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87843137255 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65489435178 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 212.727598566 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560784313725 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 618.680645161 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.9736061351 48.9658058833 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.090909091 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 5.45110844103 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307017930007 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127661526958 0.076458572812 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113336177554 0.0737576698707 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218000179718 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148559707186 0.0645574589148 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

More content wanted.

Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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