Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I am strongly agree with the statement that the internet provides a valuable information. I will illustrate my point of view by providing few necessary reasons.
First of all, I start from my student life. When I passed my intermediate exam, I was not interacted with internet and was relying only on few books in hard shape which limited my vision and provided many hurdles in seeking valuable knowledge. But, when I got admission in undergraduate course and won a laptop on merit, It would become very easy for me to access the research projects and important research papers relevant to my subject on internet which was impossible without it. I saw many video lectures on different topics to clear my concepts and simulations to learn the core of subject.
Secondly, today i have a vision to study abroad. I am aware of the needs of modern world due to the internet. Internet has helped me as a gateway to the modern and progressing world which always boosted my courage level to participate in the progress of new era which was impossible without internet.
Finally, today i am here for TOEFL exam, I never knew about it before, In my country people usually know only about IELTS. Due to internet discussions and other platforms I came to know about the TOEFL as an english proficiency exam preferred especially in USA, it was also impossible for a common person like me to appear in this exam without knowing about it which became possible only due to the internet facility.
I will conclude by saying that the world is progressing at very fast pace and every day is a revolutionary day in technology. For effective use of technology, information about the purpose and way of utilization of novel technology is important to be known world wide, internet facilitates the world in providing valuable information at right place in reasonable time frame.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 319.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89028213166 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8283993298 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548589341693 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.6269075734 48.9658058833 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174797485435 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633772067036 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068752591165 0.0737576698707 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105504383066 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580163011221 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.