Begging for money is often seen as an unfortunate event and people usually shows sympathy for such people on streets. Its difficult to imagine but anybody can end-up on street and might beg for their living. Though, they look genuine at first but we should always take extra precautions to make a good judgement, that, whether someone is really begging due to their financial broke-down or they are exposed to some other threat. So, in general, I do not believe that giving money to beggars is a good idea and there are several reasons for that.
First, these beggars can be a part of large scale of criminal business which relies on handicapped people or kids on streets. I have personally seen this in India, that how kids are used in this business and how they are forced to remain to be a part of it. For example: there is criminal gang in Mumbai, India. They usually abduct childrens from many part of India and force them to beg on streets of mumbai, so that at the end of the day they can bring money for their owners. Mostly these kids are abducted from poor families, who are unable to extend search for their child because of monetary insuffiecieny. Also these kids are kidnapped at very small age, so they do not have any memory of their home, thus can not return to their home. Though, state police are trying to stop these activities but these kids are trained well to not to speak anything against their owners. Despite, these criminal lives in very posh area.
Second, if a person is forced to beg on street due their financial condition then, one should always extend help to provide food or clothing first, instead of money. These people on street, sometimes use money to buy drugs and often, these drugs are main reason that they end-up on streets. Such activities might lead to crimes in city.
Third, People who offer food to beggars always should ensure their own saftey first. Sometimes, beggars can ask for money on highway where you have to stop your vehicle to provide your support or food. These situations are very vulnerable and might lead to an unfortunuate event. For example: Crimial might act like a beggar and ask for help. The moment you reach to them, they might attack you and loot you, or may be worse, can kill you.
In my point of view, if anybody is facing a financial issues and they have to beg for their survival then they should ask for any small job in return to the favor they received in the form of money. Though, I personally do not offer any money, but I pray for their well being.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun part seems to be countable; consider using: 'many parts'.
Suggestion: many parts
...dia. They usually abduct childrens from many part of India and force them to beg on stree...
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Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...hild because of monetary insuffiecieny. Also these kids are kidnapped at very small ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, really, second, so, then, third, thus, well, for example, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 459.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54248366013 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19462768072 2.67179642975 82% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485838779956 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 642.6 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3670977 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7727272727 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8636363636 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 5.45110844103 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212415350874 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696549080415 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592308673794 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140289611566 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047562021191 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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