Everyone should see the city where connect two continent to each other, Istanbul. It has a amazing historical places and great view. However, the city has a big problem about beggars. There is so much beggars living in the streets asking for money. You can see them everywhere. They learn how to use people's feelings. I am not the person who defend that they have the right to do this because every man should work and contribute the life even if from the base and they are not a motivational example for our children.
People can think that they have to beggar because of life's choices but I don't agree with that. Every man in society, of course have a good health, should work. It is a citizenship responsibility and basic responsibility. I know sometimes people can fall down, but it is not a good reason not to work. On the other hand, I have seen so many news about them. They use their children and the worse they poisoned their own children for looking pathetic and getting empathy on their selves.
Looking from society, beggars can also affect children. They can demonstrate that working is not the solution. I am thinking about the news that I said before, if a child sees that, he/she can think that I can get money without working, or studying because people always help and support these people on the street. It can break social bonds and rules starting to children.
Life is complicated sometimes and we can lose our motivation, or our money someday but it does not mean that we can stop and wait someone to come to us. It is not fair and right, in my opinion. Of course there should be some helping organizations for help other people but not this way, not on the streets.
Even if life can sometimes hurt one of us, it is not the way it should be. Begging is not the answer. People should work and earn money without begging, because earning doesn't mean begging. I believe that for society it is so important to diminish their number on the streets.
- “Globalization” refers to growing economic and cultural interconnectedness between different regions of the world. Because modern transportation and electronic communication has made commercial relationships between distant people easier than ever bef 3
- “Globalization” refers to growing economic and cultural interconnectedness between different regions of the world. Because modern transportation and electronic communication has made commercial relationships between distant people easier than ever bef 3
- What is the benefit of Globalization. 3
- “Globalization” refers to growing economic and cultural interconnectedness between different regions of the world. Because modern transportation and electronic communication has made commercial relationships between distant people easier than ever bef 81
- Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why? 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'continent' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'continents'.
Suggestion: continents
...e should see the city where connect two continent to each other, Istanbul. It has a amazi...
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Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ntinent to each other, Istanbul. It has a amazing historical places and great vie...
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Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... big problem about beggars. There is so much beggars living in the streets asking fo...
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Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...o beggar because of lifes choices but I dont agree with that. Every man in society, ...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...work. On the other hand, I have seen so many news about them. They use their childre...
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Line 3, column 336, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
...work. On the other hand, I have seen so many news about them. They use their children and...
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Line 9, column 170, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... money without begging, because earning doesnt mean begging. I believe that for societ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, of course, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54341736695 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40404030813 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512605042017 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.8419142495 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5833333333 100.406767564 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.875 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.20833333333 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188501135196 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0486709284407 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584837941012 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107707279478 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395926618755 0.0645574589148 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 11.7677419355 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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