Automobile has increase quality of modern life and has given many benefits to modern humankind in recent years. I explain my opinion in following reasons:
In first place in order to develop societies there are some requirements which automobile is one of them. Automobile is vital for transportation system in every society as a key factor in development stage. Transportation system includes public transportation system like bus or taxi and distribution system of goods and products. Both are necessary elements of a modern civilized society which increase the quality of life. Distribution of products can help businesses to provide their goods to people and this can help in answering a nation's demand.
Second the automobile helps people to navigate more in country's boundaries or beyond them. This resulted in improving tourism industry and related business. So people can meet and roam in many regions taking automobile advantages. In addition automobile causes sharing culture, art, religions and the other aspects of a nation between many people. For example many people have trip in year by own cars or rental cars for driving’s fun and the other aspect of travelling by car.
On the other hand, automobile industry is a significant part in manufacturing sector in many countries. It produces many job opportunities and has major role in GDP share of an economy. Automobile is an industry with various direct and indirect jobs like sales support, car repairs, car wash, sound systems, insurance and so on that can make it an undeniable industry in governments. Even if this industry does not exist in a country the indirect jobs will make automobile serious for policy makers in many governments. For example General Motors’ bankrupt in economic crisis made a major problem for government in those days that urged senators to help financially in order to save this company. A weird activity conducted by a government just for an exceptional company because of its importance and major role in macroeconomics.
In conclusion automobile has improves modern life in recent years and will enhance the quality of this life in future years with its effect on economy, various industries and life styles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: addition,
...egions taking automobile advantages. In addition automobile causes sharing culture, art,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 357.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2324929972 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97047696758 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543417366947 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.108324912 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.777777778 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61111111111 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206773775333 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0676645927927 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452289198448 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126377096819 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335494656483 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.01818996416 114% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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