Some people think that family is the most important influence on young adults.However,Other people think that friends are the most important influence in young adults.
You meet a lot of people during your life and you learn a variety of things like their ideas and opinion. This begins from the first moment you were born and it lasts until the very ending seconds of your journey in this world. However, some of those people have made more influence on you than others. I believe that friends and families can have equal impression on somebody because of the reasons I discuss below.
Personally, when a child comes to this life its parents are the very first individuals that he or she meets. Parents provide the baby child with its basic needs and the baby starts to learn the first rules in this world from them. So, an infant is so much affected by its family.
As the child grows and begins to understand more perspectives from its surrounding environment, the child feels the need to be connected to other people and this matter is being intensified when he or she reaches its school time where it should learn more about social communities which increase its friends share of influence in a young adult.
On the other hand, when this person got to its adulthood beginning something around the age of 16 to 18, this person feels a necessity to find a balance between its parents and friends to cope with the situations he or she confronts in every day ordinary life. Therefore, it is the person’s responsibility to know what is beneficial for him or her to learn from them.
In conclusion, a human can experience different affections during its long life in this planet. Sometimes these effects could be from his or her own parents and in some other cases it may affect him or her from his or her friends’ side.
- Travelling is more important than reading books in order to understand the people and the world do you Agree or disagree with the statement Use specific reasons to support your answer 88
- Research center is going to be established in a university. There is an argument whether to establish an agricultural center or a business one.which one do you choose? why? 86
- Do you agree or disagree with the statement that all of the endangered animals should be saved? compare the idea mentioned in a passage with the lecture you listened to. 75
- It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? 76
- Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
...with the situations he or she confronts in every day ordinary life. Therefore, it is the per...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63973063973 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52155059744 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548821548822 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.2280025552 48.9658058833 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0867089736019 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358063669569 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054820434909 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0496821767565 0.150856017488 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465174727691 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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