Some people think that the government should spend as much money as possible in protecting the environment. Other think money should be spent on other things such as education and healthcare. Which one of these opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Every ecosystem consists of flora and fauna where they rely on each other to support on their needs. If one of the elements of the ecosystem faced difficulty to survive, another one will also face the same difficulty to grow on. Our environment is like that ecosystem where it depends on the how we contribute to its well being as we completely rely on the environment to live on and prosper. Maybe some of us will refute the idea that rather spending money on protecting the environment, the government should spend money on education and health-care. But in my opinion, the government should spend as much money as possible to protect our environment.
The first things that come to my mind about the environment are that how much we really depend on it. It gives the most essential thing “oxygen” to breadth on this plant as well as food to live in prosper. It is like a mother of the family. We really cannot think of a family without a mother. We really know how much a family suffers without a female figure called mother. The environment gives us all the things to us which we really need in our day to day life. If we consider the basic needs of human, we will see that the environment provides us with all of it like food, cloth, house, medicine etc. The thing that provides these much then, it is our duty to take of it. So to take care of the environment we should really spend as much as possible for its well-being.
Furthermore, we are the only one who is destroying our planet by polluting the environment. In the last century, we are the responsible one to increase the temperature by Carbon-di-oxide emission, using natural gas and oil, deforestation and many more. If we observe closely, we will be able to see the clear picture of how our activities have a clear impact on our environment. Our sea-life is suffering most for humans biggest invention plastic as we are dumping our waste in the sea. For the last couple of years, the planet observes the biggest heatwave in history as well as the flood, drought, wildfire and so on. The rate of natural disaster is increasing day by day all thanks to our activities and carelessness. It is high time we should take care of the environment by spending as much money as possible to keep our environment pollution free.
Money really matters to live a healthy life as it is the thing which is used to buy things that we need most. But, if the environment to whom we depend on the most is a polluted one because of our carelessness, then money really posses no value. So to protect the environment and to keep its best interest to support us, the government should spend money as much as possible. Like it or not, this planet is the only one which can support live system in our solar system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...like that ecosystem where it depends on the how we contribute to its well being as we c...
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Line 5, column 415, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'humans the biggest'.
Suggestion: humans the biggest
...ent. Our sea-life is suffering most for humans biggest invention plastic as we are dumping our...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, really, so, then, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.0752688172 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2276.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 501.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54291417166 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.73107062784 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72019787812 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.417165668663 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 730.8 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1770684959 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.04 100.406767564 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.04 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.56 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2223196525 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759060249532 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911420306798 0.0737576698707 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16157741144 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077866702551 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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