Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people nowadays do not give enough time to helping their communities.
Every living person of a society needs to give his/ her time to help a community which is actually needed for the prosperity of the community. The practice of this participation to the help out community is being followed from generations to generations with conscious or without conscious. But, nowadays, there is a saying that the new generation of the young people of our community does not give enough time to helping their communities, which I totally disagree. I am going present some reasons in my stance why I disagree with the statement.
Nowadays, if anything bad happens why the young generations are the one to be blamed for the incidents even if there is no relation of them with the incidents. The elders really think the young generation of our community is really doing nothing to help out the community but they are really wrong. For example, a couple of days ago there was a protest all over the country named "safe passage for everybody" because of the increasing road accident as most of us do not follow the traffic rules while driving. Because of their great will to help out the community the whole world saw it.
Furthermore, in a poor country where many people live under the poverty line, even then young generation is helping out the poor people by educating their children which really helps to reduce the crime of a nation. I saw a couple of my university students giving education to the poor children everyday afternoon, who can not afford to go to school, though the level education is not up to the point, still is useful for them to differentiate between right and wrong. If it is not considered helpful to the community, then I really do not what will be considered useful.
Conclusively the young people are really giving enough time to help their communities. All we need to see their efforts by opening our eyes not by closing them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 521, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...follow the traffic rules while driving. Because of their great will to help out the com...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, really, so, still, then, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 328.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76219512195 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72147337138 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524390243902 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.2412107927 48.9658058833 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.153846154 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324193804174 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122667817067 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104970188143 0.0737576698707 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209954183897 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652834470605 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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