Some people think that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problem. Agree or disagree
Since the beginning of the time, human being has always strived to improve their living standards and bring more convenience to their day-to-day lives.
Throughout history, communication has played prominent role in all societies. human being loves progress. they always trying to make a new thing in all field such as science, engineering and everything that influence their lives and made it easier. The emergence of the internet was a big cultural revolution that effects on all humans and even environment. I believe that the internet is one of the best humans inventions, as a 23 years old girl I really can’t imagine life before the internet. However, I consent that access to so much information is a gift that human being has given themselves. but like other humans inventions it most also suffer. I will explicate my point of view in 2 outstanding sentences.
First and foremost the most important reason I would like to bring here is accessing to so much information from the internet is like we can enjoy the sea sunset in our living room. As much beautiful and sad. using the internet is the prerequisite of modern life and it is like a treatment for human’s new illness. Nowadays people read books less than past they don’t have enough time (or they won’t) for researching themselves problems or even, solutions. they just need information very quickly from around the world. some fast reasonable answer for their modern problems. As personal experience I’m very interested in all psychology’s fields, anyway, psychology is not my professional field of study but every day or week(depends on the article) I get an article from Google scholar and read them with happiness and they are very effective for my personal knowledge.
The second important point that explains my opinion is that yes, I really agree with so much information on the internet but I don’t agree that all types of information be available for everyone. some things are very sensitive and need expertise. everyone who read one article about medicine is not a doctor or in any other fields. my girlfriend’s father is a pediatrician; as everyone knows it is a very hard and sensitive job and requires high knowledge of human’s body and children’s psychology. He studied for at least 30 years and now most of parents give him wrong suggestions that they read on the internet. it’s a torture for him and dangerous for kids as well.
To wrap it up and make a long story short I believe like every other thing the internet has a good and bad face. we have to be smart and use this gift in our bests not in destructive way that cans us or our families. I believe everything depends on us because is our choice and live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, first, however, if, really, second, so, well, at least, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2299.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92291220557 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92602997864 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528907922912 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7528752367 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.96 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.68 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28 5.45110844103 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140017085981 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391126939827 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469150393189 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677163040901 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449312572126 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.