Some people want to work for a large company, others choose to work for a small one. Which one do you prefer?
People are different and our preferences in terms of what kind of company to work in vary.Personally, I prefer to work in large corporations rather than in small ones. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, it is easy to establish a career in large companies because they have a myriad of ranks that their employees can move through. If a person has an astonishing career, he can benefit from this financially and support his family. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. Right after the graduation from pharmacy school, I found a job of a regular pharmacist in a local chain pharmacy. I tried my best to show my employes that I was a responsible and hardworking person. My supervisors noticed my effort and in just six months they promoted me to a pharmacy manager`s assistant. Not only that but in one year I was offered a well-paid position of a manager in another unit of the same company. Although working in an independent pharmacy is less stressful, this kind of business cannot guarantee young professionals fast career growth. To that end, employment in a huge company provides staff with opportunities to succeed professionally and financially.
Secondly, it is more interesting to work in a giant corporation than in a small business. These days, competition on the market is tremendous and for this reason, big companies constantly look for new ways to please their customers and make people purchase products and services from them but not from their rivals. In this way, employees of these businesses are involved continuously in a variety of new programs. For instance, in my chain pharmacy, we offer our patients numerous services to help them stay healthy such as vaccination from infectious diseases, education and support people who try to quit smoking or strive to lose weight. By providing these services, I always learn something new about my profession, which makes my days at work truly fascinating. On the contrary, small firms rarely introduce innovations in their work routine, and so their staff gets bored oftentimes.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is beneficial to be an employee of a large company. This is because it is fascinating and helps people to excel.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Personally
...of what kind of company to work in vary.Personally, I prefer to work in large corporations...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1908.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96875 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04426526411 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591145833333 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1067677695 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.421052632 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2105263158 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212534720172 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560043085719 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597489259921 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142296994667 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835626059362 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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