some university students prefer living in campus housing such as dormitories. Other students prefer living in off-campus housing such as apartment. if if you were face with this decision, which of these two options would you choose? use specific reasons and details to support it.
There is no shortage of debate about whether it is better to live in university dormitories or in an apartmen. In my opinion, it is more comfortable to live in outside university campus than to live in campus. I feel this way for two main reasons. The first reason is that you have the freedom to do whatever you want. The second reason is that you are going to learn how to be dependable person.
First of all, by living in an apartment, you have the freedom to do whatever you want at any time you want. You can have your own parties and you can invit your friends at any time with out any restrictions as in dormitory. Also you could go out and come at any time you want. No limits for you to do what you want as in college campus. For example, you cannot go out with a friend to have dinner and watch a movie untill late night if you were living in a university dormitory because you have to be in the campus at 6:00 PM or you will not be able to get in. however, you can go out for late time and enjoy your time if you were living in a flat.
Not only do you have the freedom to do whatever you want, but also you are going to learn how to be independent person. This reason is free important to every one because it effect our real life. Living in a flat help you to learn how to depend on yourself. You are going to make your own decisions for a lot of things. For example, you need to cook, wash and to clean for youself. For these things you need to do by yourself, you are teaching yourself how to be dependable and succussful person in your future. But by living in a campus you are depending on the dormitory stuff. Most of things can be done for you.
To sum up with, some students prefer living inside universities while others prefer to live out side. Living in an apartment give you the benefits of your freedom and better learning about people real life. If you are an ambitious person and never like to be restricted, do not think of living in a university dormitory.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, while, for example, i feel, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 52.1666666667 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 386.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.17357512953 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30887160265 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.422279792746 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6093788459 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2272727273 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.95454545455 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29766208943 0.236089414692 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11736513063 0.076458572812 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662491035308 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226026932362 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413181141589 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.61 10.9000537634 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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