do you agree or disagree that parents are the best teachers
There is no shortage of debate that parents are the best teachers for their children or not. In my opinion, parents are the greatest teachers for children. I feel this way for two main reasons. The first reason is the are the closest people to them. Secondly, they have the strongest effect on them.
Parents are the closest people to their childern is the first reason to be the best teacher for them. The know the childern well and they know their charecteristic. Thus, they can teach their childern with ways that confinent for their kids. Also the are able to convey the informaton and topics to their childern funny ways what impressed their childern and make them enjoying learning. For example, parents know the time that their kids will pay attension to learning and the time for their playing. They are watching them all the time, so if they make some mistacks they told them that is wrong and learn them the right thing to do.
The other reason for parents being best teachers for their childern is that they affect their childern strongly. Kids usually get effect by their parents and their behavior and they always try to simulate their parents. Because of that parents can concentrate on this point and be a great teacher for their childern. Parents are the only peole in this world can affect their childern in this way. For instant, kids always watch the ways their father and mother talk, eat and act. The way their parents act with each others and with different people. Thus the kids try to simulate all that things the saw and learn from their parents.
In conclusion, parents are the best teacher for their kids because they are living with them for long time. childern get affected easily because the still pure and do not know any thing about life. Parents are the primery and fundemental teachers for their childern.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 323.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7306501548 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13725465281 2.67179642975 80% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43653250774 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 618.680645161 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7004887553 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.7619047619 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.380952381 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149115254657 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708547261592 0.076458572812 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752343867006 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13649162213 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476903495566 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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