some university students prefer living in campus housing such as dormitories. Other students prefer living in off-campus housing such as apartment. if if you were face with this decision, which of these two options would you choose? use specific reasons and details to explain your choice
There is no shortage of debate whether to choose living in an apartment or in the campus doremitories. Som epeople prefer dwelling in their own apartment. However, I prefer living in the dormitory to a private apartment. Mainly for two reasons, it saves you time and it provides for you a chance to meet students who benefits you in several things.
The first reason why I rather live in a dormitory is that it saves you time. Time is pricceless when it comes to universties and it’s a mandtory policy to arrive at the percise time in which the lecture starts. Some people get punished for being late and if that’s not enough they also miss an important part in the lecture. My own experience is a compelling evidence of this. When I used to dwell in my own apartment which is far away from my collage. I did not arrive at time and I always missunderstand what the lecture is all about, because I only get to attend the last sections of it. In contrast of me, my cousin used to dwell in the campus dorms, which is located inside the campus, he used to attend the class just on time. As a result, he grasped the ideas and the informations that were presented in class without getting baffled. According to those experiements, I prefer living in the dormitories from now on.
Not only it saves you time, but also it inreases your chances to encounter with such an educated students who benefits you with your studies. Usually students who live in the campus residential houses have an advantage of knowing significantly astute people. That lowers down the hardships you face in some topics or lecrures you do not find it intelligble, because the roomates who lives with you can help you with whatever problem you face in the whole process of education. For instance, there are different kinds of minds and ways of thinking inside the room you live in only imagine how much information you could gain from every aspects and experiences that others have. Being able to encounter different types of students is just a life-chance oppurtunity that mere provided by the dorms.
To conclude, dwelling in the campus resdential houses are much better and I prefer living in an environment such like that. Others might have a different ideas from mine but I strongly believe that dorms is the foremost. What I mentioned is mere a side of it’s advantages and benefits there is a lot more. Were I to br you, I would choose to dwell inside the campus itself without any hastitaions
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- some university students prefer living in campus housing such as dormitories. Other students prefer living in off-campus housing such as apartment. if if you were face with this decision, which of these two options would you choose? use specific reasons 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 50, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to live'.
Suggestion: to live
...no shortage of debate whether to choose living in an apartment or in the campus doremi...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ience is a compelling evidence of this. When I used to dwell in my own apartment whi...
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Line 3, column 605, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...t to attend the last sections of it. In contrast of me, my cousin used to dwell in the c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the class just on time. As a result, he grasped the ideas and the informations t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...affled. According to those experiements, I prefer living in the dormitories from ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'student'?
Suggestion: student
...nces to encounter with such an educated students who benefits you with your studies. Usu...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'idea'?
Suggestion: idea
...ike that. Others might have a different ideas from mine but I strongly believe that ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t have a different ideas from mine but I strongly believe that dorms is the forem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, well, for instance, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2053.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67653758542 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66418805598 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498861047836 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8069684942 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3181818182 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9545454545 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.59090909091 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390461265329 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101323264828 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744647806842 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239810946611 0.150856017488 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635534077999 0.0645574589148 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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