Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible, While some young adults prefer to live with their families longer. Which do you think is better?
According to me, the situation where young adults prefer to live longer with their parents, is what I prefer. There are many reasons for doing so, both economical and emotional. Economical reasons being saving money, maintaining budget and support from family. Emotional reasons being taking care of parents, strong connection with parents and availability of moral support.
The primary reason for living with parents is financial support. The young adults are trying to establish their careers at that time. For that they start with scratch i.e. with no money or very little money. So living with parents save their major expenditures like apartment rent money, electricity bills or food bills. They are more able to focus on their careen and passions. Also in case when these young adults are unable to secure a job or searching for jobs, parents are there to help them with their financial need. For example, in India, young adults if they are in same locality, they stay with their parents. Their parents not only help them with getting on their feet but actually pay for their college tuition and other related expenses. That way their children can get proper college education and secure their future.
The secondary and most important reason why young adults prefer to live with their parents is quite emotional. Again for example, in a country like India, children are taught from childhood about their responsibilities to respect and take care to their parents when they get older. The children in India are quite close to their parents and want to take responsibilities of their growing old parents. Also the connection between a mother and child is very strong, so many even after going into the adulthood doesn't break the bond of love between a mother and a child. So young adult choose to stay with parents out of love. Further the young adults recieve moral support and crucial advice from their parents when they are going through a rough time. So for the young adults, their parents act as their pillars.
Therefore due to the above mentioned reasons, I think the situation where the young adults live with their parents for a longer time, is better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: Economic
...oing so, both economical and emotional. Economical reasons being saving money, maintaining...
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Suggestion: Also,
...ibilities of their growing old parents. Also the connection between a mother and chi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...any even after going into the adulthood doesnt break the bond of love between a mother...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... their parents act as their pillars. Therefore due to the above mentioned reasons, I t...
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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'but', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'for example', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.255583126551 0.229887763892 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.141439205955 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101736972705 0.0866891130778 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0496277915633 0.046263068375 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0769230769231 0.0685040099705 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.119106699752 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0372208436725 0.0351676179071 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.34157637526 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0322580645161 0.0309702414327 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0645161290323 0.0887237588012 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00248138957816 0.0209618222197 12% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.0173697270471 0.0139019557991 125% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2173.0 2387.08602151 91% => OK
No of words: 365.0 408.028673835 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.95342465753 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.48200974243 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342465753425 0.338922669872 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.232876712329 0.251872472559 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.123287671233 0.174417080927 71% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0849315068493 0.112833075102 75% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34157637526 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490410958904 0.524397521467 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.7475539763 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5909090909 20.5533526081 81% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8243820895 48.84282405 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7727272727 120.699889404 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5909090909 20.5533526081 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.409090909091 0.644075263715 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 39.8785803238 45.7405998639 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.53703703704 1.45489161554 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348865245381 0.300154397459 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.138007721568 0.103427244359 133% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0944959135109 0.0752933317313 126% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.480823464731 0.497263757937 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.154370946307 0.151897553556 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139733217676 0.114077575197 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103006916203 0.0781384742642 132% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.40199500158 0.336927656856 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0934178278865 0.067059652881 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255808752615 0.210909579961 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340285879761 0.0618886996521 55% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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