Sometimes people think nowadays the media (TV, newspaper, the Internet) are less concerned about the accuracy of news than in the past, and the incorrect information may cause more problem to the public. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, there is a different view of the issue about whether the incorrect information could hurt the public or not. Depending on personal experiences and beliefs, we may find that some people hold that the inaccuracy information will definitely make some bad effect on us, while others have an opposite attitude. As far as I concerned, we disagree with the statement that it may cause more problem to the public. The following discussion will explore my view.
Indeed, the information in the media should be as most accuracy as possible. The right information is essential for the media, especially in the program of the news, and telling the public the truth of the fact is the duty for such media. Moreover, if the media delivery the wrong messages to the public, those messages may influence the judgment of people, and then cause them have not fully correct judging on those things, facts, or comments. Thus, in some of the views, it really has some not good effect.
On the other hand, does it really cause more problem to the public? Sometimes the media as news must have to report some information which does not have definite answers, or some things only are guessed by the reporters of the news. For example, the decision made by the president of US will make which influence and how the bad effect to the economy of American will be, which have no an absolute answer and only can be guessed for the commentators, and the media cannot without report it just because it still not happens.
In fact, the information from the media, no matter TV, newspaper, or the Internet, will have some incorrect in sometimes. However, we cannot say it will cause more trouble just due to the accuracy is going to worse than before, because we all have the ability to figure out whether the information is right or wrong. Even if somebody has no or less such ability to posit the information which can believe or not, we still should not assail to more incorrect news will let us have more problems but should complain the people who have no ability are not going to improve it.
In conclusion, despite the fact that the wrong information does have the bad effect, this problem has existed a long time, and there are other factors should consider discreetly when we make the comment that wrong information will cause more problems than before. Therefore, we could not presumptuously believe the statement
- In 1957 a European silver coin dating to the eleventh century was discovered at a Native American archaeological site in the state of Maine in the United States. Many people believed the coin had been originally brought to North America by European explor 83
- In 1957 a European silver coin dating to the eleventh century was discovered at a Native American archaeological site in the state of Maine in the United States. Many people believed the coin had been originally brought to North America by European explor 81
- The following appeared in an editorial in a local newspaper.“Commuters complain that increased rush-hour traffic on Blue Highway between the suburbs and the city center has doubled their commuting time. The favored proposal of the motorists' lobby 59
- Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they challenge the specific arguments presented in the reading passage.Scientists are considering the possibility of sending humans to Mars in the coming decades. Although there have been 3
- In 1957 a European silver coin dating to the eleventh century was discovered at a Native American archaeological site in the state of Maine in the United States. Many people believed the coin had been originally brought to North America by European explor 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 455, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...se things, facts, or comments. Thus, in some of the views, it really has some not good effe...
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Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...economy of American will be, which have no an absolute answer and only can be gues...
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Line 4, column 339, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...is right or wrong. Even if somebody has no or less such ability to posit the infor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1988.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 417.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76738609113 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51163295935 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467625899281 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.9 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.9270910912 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0625 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.45110844103 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270635750997 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995247965585 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667661812821 0.0737576698707 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156453311989 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378955143952 0.0645574589148 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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