As a student of university that has a long break between university semesters, the university requires all students to do one of the following for one month during the break:
1、Students must take a course on the subject that has no direct connection to their majors of study ( For example, a student majoring in engineering may take course in fine arts or social science.)
2、Students must volunteer to work in the university’s city or their hometowns to improve some aspects of life of the city or their own town. (For example, students may help local primary school children with their homework.) Which one do you think is more beneficial for students in their university? Why? Given detailed examples and reasons. Use your OWN words, do NOT use memorized examples.
Nowadays, there is a growing common belief that students in university should be equipped with not only academic knowledge of their major, but also some basic views of other subjects in respond to the social needs. However, the majority of people still holds that volunteering in their city or town is more sensible when it comes to spending a long holiday. Personally, I prefer the former idea: to ask students to attend classes on other subjects for the following reasons.
First and foremost, taking a course one has never learned about is beneficial for their future career and life. In other words, the rapid development of modern society suggests that it is not sufficient for a college student to know only about the subject of his major. Some simple and useful knowledge beyond one’s major will be needed in future career as well. For instance, my elder brother Jackson who was an economy major was required to have classes on computer for two months in a long break, which seemed as a waste of time at the first sight. Luckily, it was just because he applied some computer skills helped him get promoted as he solved a serious problem on an important meeting, using the knowledge he once studied in school. Therefore, the advantage of taking such courses should not be ignored.
Another point worth mentioning is that certain awareness on other subjects can indirectly facilitate individual’s study in his or her major. To be more concise, of great importance to students is the ability to learn knowledge in various fields, instead of sticking to just their major, since different knowledges are compatible and can in turn have a good impact on majors inapparently. Me myself is a good case in point as my major was Literature, while I was asked and chose to attend French courses for the whole break. Tired as I was, I found it actually assist in understanding French poems as well as several renowned writers deeper than ever. Thus, I cannot emphasis more about the necessity of opening your eyes to more new knowledge.
Admittedly, it would not hurt to do some voluntary activities such as cleaning the road in town in order to make students’ homeland a better one. Nevertheless, it requires a large amount of time and consistency to complete the work, which will certainly bother university students because their priority in school is to learn academically.
To put it into a nutshell, students are well-advised to have classes different from their major in the valuable break to accumulate skills for later career and the comprehensive understanding of other fields.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 561, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'assists'?
Suggestion: assists
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, apparently, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2164.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95194508009 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73123607899 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560640732265 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 684.0 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.2060197909 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.294117647 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7058823529 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23529411765 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233029348641 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723413686958 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511430350174 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136706033248 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470990552101 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 86.8835125448 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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