Taking part in school organizations and activity clubs are just as important as academic classes for college students.
I’m stay neutrality. Because for this statement is depends on their own character. Different people has their own personality, someone outgoing like stay with friends to upgrade the communicate skills, other side someone don’t like talk too much but they have amazing special skill like painting or something more. So I think this statement have double side for different student. Everyone have their own way to practice themselves, not just one way to taking part in school organizations and activity clubs. For example my roommate, he is a very quiet boy, stay in room everyday but have his own friend relation, most of the painter know he, I’ve been once joined them for dinner, they all talk something they interest that I can feel their happy, but stay in school he was talk very less words with classmate. For another example, one of coworker in my company, he was the students chairman in their school, outgoing and confidence in work, every one like him, only a problem is he lock of work skills, but he have really good relation with workmate, they all like help him to fix problem. Those two cases show us different character in the college, also I think suitable on this topic and my opinion. Everyone have their own life, different way need different to walk on it, there are no same way suit everyone, just walk on your side, keep going is the best for ourself. Find your way and be yourself, you will reach your place
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
I'm stay neutrality. Because for this statement is depends on their ...
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Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...going like stay with friends to upgrade the communicate skills, other side someone don't l...
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Line 1, column 582, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...e, he is a very quiet boy, stay in room everyday but have his own friend relation, most ...
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Line 1, column 801, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun words is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...py, but stay in school he was talk very less words with classmate. For another examp...
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Line 1, column 891, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...e of coworker in my company, he was the students chairman in their school, outgoing and ...
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Line 1, column 1024, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a problem is he lock of work skills, but he have really good relation with workma...
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Line 1, column 1029, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...blem is he lock of work skills, but he have really good relation with workmate, the...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1977.66487455 60% => OK
No of words: 252.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74206349206 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43505657099 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 212.727598566 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 366.3 618.680645161 59% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.1932770735 48.9658058833 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.45110844103 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.53405017921 22% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110836967995 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494946823132 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700578258384 0.0737576698707 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110836967995 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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