Telling the truth
People in the majority of their life have a relationship with others. Some people believe that it is important, to tell the truth in conversation, while others think that it is preferable to do not tell the truth to the people. In my opinion, saying the truth is better than lying. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, the main reason why I approve of the title statement lies in the belief that for having a durable and long-lasting relationship each of the persons must be trustful and honest. Honesty and truthfully comes only by saying the truth in the conversation. In my mind, no one can say lie and have an expectation to be with his friends for many years. I remember that when I was a university student, I had a close friend that he was very ingenious and astute. We spent most of our time with each other in the library or gym, park, and at the party. He had a very unsuitable character: He wasn't honest with me! Although we enjoy our relationship, never I could trust him. This feature finally enforced me to break the relationship.
Moreover, if a person tells the truth in most conversations, He can find more friends. Living in this way helps him to have a better future. In fact, people in society prefer to have a relationship with trustable persons. They give advice or suggest a job for these kinds of people. For example, in the past, one of our distant family members find a good job in the automobile industry. As times went, I saw that he promoted in his career and after ten years he became a manager in the important section of there. One day I met him at a ceremony. I went to have a conversation with him or at least ask about his advises about finding a job in the industry. When we started to talk, he said that a key factor in finding a job is linking to important persons in any field. I asked him how I can find these guys? He claimed that by being trustful and honest. If you have these features they should come to find you!
In summary, I strongly believe that telling the truth in any situation is essential for having good relationship with others. Saying the truth helps to have enduring friendships and find more friends that help you to get more opportunities in your life. In addition to the saying truth, I feel that human beings must be devoted to the friendships and if a person has those two character he would be successful in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 599, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
... He had a very unsuitable character: He wasnt honest with me! Although we enjoy our r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, moreover, so, while, at least, for example, i feel, in addition, in fact, in summary, in my opinion, to begin with, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43362831858 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61289461383 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493362831858 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 618.680645161 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4596640576 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.16 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.08 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217279555076 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673491048913 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131825190735 0.0737576698707 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187030677324 0.150856017488 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129491657543 0.0645574589148 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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