There will be fewer cars in use in twenty years.
According to the prompt, there will be fewer cars in use in twenty years from now on. Personally, I disagree with this statement since the human population increases annually and people need to travel quickly and conveniently. Furthermore, government also has more commitment in improving roads as well as the welfare of the society.
To begin with, year by year, the number of people always increases significantly. Furthermore, according to the data presented by United Nations, there will be millions more of people in two decades. Although many countries have already reduced their birth rate, as a whole, the number of people are still increasing annually. In corresponding to this increase, I strongly believe that in the future, there will be more cars since people tend to strive to make their lives much easier. By driving car, people can easily move from one place to another place and they can save much time on the way. In addition, many benefits they can get such as having space to put foods from supermarket and luggage.
Second, seeing the development of current infrastructure in which there are many constructions of roads and underground routes nowadays, I predict that more people will opt to drive a car since they have more space to drive a car. Currently, many people, however, choose not to drive a car because they are tired and disappointed with the road’s major problem which is traffic congestion. Nowadays, some people tend to use public transportation such as subway and bus because they have specific route cannot be passed by personal vehicles and consequently, people can hinder traffic jam. Nonetheless, with the hard work of current government in improving roads, it may indicate that more people will change their daily habits and drive a car instead of using public transportation.
To put it in a nutshell, I strongly believe that the cars used by people will be more in twenty years from today on since the human population is predicted higher and the development of current roads indicates that there will be more space for driving area.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'consequently', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nonetheless', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as well as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.244215938303 0.229887763892 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.151670951157 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0822622107969 0.0866891130778 95% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0591259640103 0.046263068375 128% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0359897172237 0.0685040099705 53% => OK
Prepositions: 0.136246786632 0.118717715034 115% => OK
Participles: 0.0411311053985 0.0351676179071 117% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78943481856 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0359897172237 0.0309702414327 116% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0642673521851 0.0887237588012 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0334190231362 0.0209618222197 159% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00514138817481 0.0139019557991 37% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2089.0 2387.08602151 88% => OK
No of words: 347.0 408.028673835 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02017291066 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.340057636888 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.239193083573 0.251872472559 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170028818444 0.174417080927 97% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123919308357 0.112833075102 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78943481856 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504322766571 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 52.8527003093 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6684587814 68% => OK
Sentence length: 24.7857142857 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2788678099 48.84282405 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.214285714 120.699889404 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.5533526081 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07142857143 0.644075263715 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.54480286738 0% => OK
Readability: 48.7050226431 45.7405998639 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.70833333333 1.45489161554 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270155248418 0.300154397459 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.112557478614 0.103427244359 109% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0732871218888 0.0752933317313 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.554452209258 0.497263757937 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147486493319 0.151897553556 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132144869146 0.114077575197 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.181224113245 0.0781384742642 232% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.399643074634 0.336927656856 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0482223460346 0.067059652881 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23334107128 0.210909579961 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100928295974 0.0618886996521 163% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 8.42114695341 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.