THE TIME WE SPEND IN COLLEGE IS THE BEST OF A PERSON'S LIFE.
When we are in college we spend a few years thinking and hoping that these years pass and fast. In my opinion, I am agreeing with the thought that the time we had in college is the best in our personal life for two important reasons. First, because when we are there we are trying to mushroom our knowledge to use it on the work field as soon as we can. Secondly, when we are in college we spend our leisure time with friends and doing things that we love to do.
To begin with my first reason, when we are in college we try and make a grueling work to attain our personal goals, we always want to increase our knowledge so when the time comes we can obtain some good grades or be the best on your class. For example, if you are craving some good grades, you must study hard, so you should enhance all the information that the professor gave to you in class and then, dedicate some of your free time to study and this plan will give you astonishing results with your grades.
Secondly, as I mentioned in college we have much time to be with friends on the weekend or after class, this time is the best because when we grow up we would not have time to do this, we will have to work, spend time with family and a bulky number of things that would not let you to be with your friends and we should cope with. My personal experience is a good example of this, when I went to college I had so many friends and spend much of my time with them; Moreover when I left the college, I did not have time to be with them because I felt in love with my actual wife and I prefer being with her instead of with my friends and also because I had to work to earn money for me.
In conclusion, I think that the time that we had in college was the best and I recommend to everyone to enjoy it, because this happens only once in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...use I had to work to earn money for me. In conclusion, I think that the time tha...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'for example', 'i think', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.167525773196 0.229887763892 73% => OK
Verbs: 0.180412371134 0.158761421928 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0515463917526 0.0866891130778 59% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0438144329897 0.046263068375 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.146907216495 0.0685040099705 214% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.134020618557 0.118717715034 113% => OK
Participles: 0.020618556701 0.0351676179071 59% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.05253998846 2.67179642975 77% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0463917525773 0.0309702414327 150% => OK
Particles: 0.00257731958763 0.00188951952338 136% => OK
Determiners: 0.0670103092784 0.0887237588012 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0231958762887 0.0209618222197 111% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0231958762887 0.0139019557991 167% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1860.0 2387.08602151 78% => OK
No of words: 361.0 408.028673835 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15235457064 5.86048508987 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.204986149584 0.338922669872 60% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.15512465374 0.251872472559 62% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0747922437673 0.174417080927 43% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0332409972299 0.112833075102 29% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.05253998846 2.67179642975 77% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.432132963989 0.524397521467 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.2116034546 59.2087087015 75% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6684587814 44% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 40.1111111111 20.5533526081 195% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 93.4475491623 48.84282405 191% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 206.666666667 120.699889404 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.1111111111 20.5533526081 195% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 0.644075263715 224% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 55.6235764851 45.7405998639 122% => OK
Elegance: 0.868055555556 1.45489161554 60% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388180816378 0.300154397459 129% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.236099345896 0.103427244359 228% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.101633601749 0.0752933317313 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.738916104506 0.497263757937 149% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132109998578 0.151897553556 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.239045706336 0.114077575197 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111492835701 0.0781384742642 143% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.398027992338 0.336927656856 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.059412893625 0.067059652881 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308169055125 0.210909579961 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675047331635 0.0618886996521 109% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.86379928315 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.4623655914 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 13.6433691756 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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