Today, we live in a huge technigal improvement. people should do many tasks every day in order to be able to live in stable manner. the question is, whether, today we live in easy life than before many decades or not. This can be weighed in many aspects. Admittedly, some believes grandsparents lived easier life when were kisd. This is because, they live in small sociaties, and all togather, therefore they help each other. I concur with statement, today we live in easier and more comfortable life. I will explore to a couple reason to explain my view point.
To begin with, as I said above improvent in technology simplify a lot of our duties. innovation of many electric devices facilitate kids academic studying. This is a compelling example explain this point. in the past, there is no advance equipments that help students in their academic classes. My grand mother faced a difficulties to find any resourses for her assigenments or project. She spent long time to finish her projects. THis is mainly because there is no internet or smart devices that help her to get information. As contrast my daughter enale to finish the project perfectly with very short time because, she can browse and get information from you tube or justb Google it.as we can see how easy live our kids live.
Additional, today there is improvement in medical feild, moreover, many new type of antibiotic and medication are discovered. this make our life comfortable. Imagine, when my grand parents were kids. people dye from even very simple cuase. hencev there is no enough knowleges, furthermore people before many decades were not aducated enough to protect themselves. today with a tremendous medical progression. People can withstand there health issue easily. For instance, before people dye from flu, because there was no vaccination in that time. Today even with pandamic disiease like corona virus. we can protect our live by vaccination.
Today, we live in a huge technigal improvement. people should do many tasks every day in order to be able to live in stable manner. the question is, whether, today we live in easy life than before many decades or not. This can be weighed in many aspects. Admittedly, some believes grandsparents lived easier life when were kisd. This is because, they live in small sociaties, and all togather, therefore they help each other. I concur with statement, today we live in easier and more comfortable life. I will explore to a couple reason to explain my view point.
To begin with, as I said above improvent in technology simplify a lot of our duties. innovation of many electric devices facilitate kids academic studying. This is a compelling example explain this point. in the past, there is no advance equipments that help students in their academic classes. My grand mother faced a difficulties to find any resourses for her assigenments or project. She spent long time to finish her projects. THis is mainly because there is no internet or smart devices that help her to get information. As contrast my daughter enale to finish the project perfectly with very short time because, she can browse and get information from you tube or justb Google it.as we can see how easy live our kids live.
Additional, today there is improvement in medical feild, moreover, many new type of antibiotic and medication are discovered. this make our life comfortable. Imagine, when my grand parents were kids. people dye from even very simple cause. hence there is no enough knowleges, furthermore people before many decades were not aducated enough to protect themselves. today with a tremendous medical progression. People can withstand there health issue easily. For instance, before people dye from flu, because there was no vaccination in that time. Today even with pandamic disiease like corona virus. we can protect our live by vaccination.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00310559006 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6974637557 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590062111801 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5439874364 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.9615384615 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3846153846 20.6045352989 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.494889943753 0.236089414692 210% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123389782085 0.076458572812 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150092096733 0.0737576698707 203% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.338364749629 0.150856017488 224% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.234045149958 0.0645574589148 363% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 58.1214874552 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.83 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.