today's life compared to past
Life is not easy and each decade you live in you will have some problems in your life. If we compare today's life with the life of our grandparent, we will notice that some of the problems they were faced to do not exist, but, we have faced to some new problems. But, all in all, the life we have today is much easier than the life of our grandparents and I would like to elaborate my opinion with following reasons.
First, technology has solved lots of problems. One of the aspect which make technology precious is its rule in reduction of our problems. If we have a glance at our life, we will easily notice that how much our life is affected by technology and how much it has made our life easier. Last year when I realized I need glasses, my doctor told me: " You can easily do an operation on your eyes which just takes ten seconds and after that you will not need to wear glasses." After I had this operation, when I compared my life to my grandfather's life, I realized how much easy my life is. In the past, people had to take dangerous and hard treatments and even do not be sure whether this treatment can cure them or not, but, nowadays thank to technology, we can be sure about the treatments and cure most of our diseases by a simple treatment.
second, internet has made everything fast. When we want to buy something or find the answer of a question, we do not need to go out or look for a person who may know the answer, we can easily use the internet and have access to everything in everywhere really fast. Last year when I wanted to do my master's degree project, I needed a unique flour which was not available in local markets, but thank to internet, I could easily buy it from the Amazon webpage and received it in just a week. If we compare the way we buy goods with the way our grandparents had to buy them from local markets, we get how internet could make our life easier and makes everything available in the shortest time.
To cut the long story short, all I want to say is that, each day which passes, the life becomes easier and easier and by making a glance at our grandparent's life and comparing it with today or possible future, we notice how easy our life is. Moreover to presented justifications, improvement of life qualities has made our life much easier and that is why my conviction is our life is easier compared to the life of our grandparents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...of our grandparent, we will notice that some of the problems they were faced to do not exis...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Second
... our diseases by a simple treatment. second, internet has made everything fast. Whe...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 243, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...future, we notice how easy our life is. Moreover to presented justifications, improvemen...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34888888889 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49123797873 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.433333333333 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.1344086022 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7800732573 48.9658058833 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.785714286 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1428571429 20.6045352989 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27126970595 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945831455612 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856150552941 0.0737576698707 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180037348735 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867137100003 0.0645574589148 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.0537634409 147% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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