escape from prison
The text is discussing chevalier who is known for his famous writing. This writer is has one the most controversial art works and there are some reasons which proofs we cannot rely on all the expressed notes from his. on the other hand, the goes against three points of the reading and explains why chevalier's notes is reliable.
Firstly, the text explains that chevalier claimed that he was wealthy during the time he was living in switzerland and he used to participated in so many parties and gambling, but there are some evidences which show he has borrowed some money from bank and based on this point, we cannot believe that he was a wealthy person. The professor goes against this point by saying that even if you be wealthy, when you spend so much money on parties and gambling, you will need to get some more cash and you need to borrow it from banks. She states that even wealthy people will borrow some money from bank, when they are out of cash, and it does not not mean they are not really wealthy.
Secondly, the text states that it is really hard to believe that someone remember all the conversations he had before and write them really accurately after some years. The professor goes against this claim and says that chevalier used to write all of his particular conversations each night and it can help him to mention those conversations later, she also states that some people confirmed that chevalier used to write everything which will stengthen this point that all stated conversations in his notes are accurate.
Thirdly, the text says that chevalier knew so many famouse people who had this power to help him to escape from prison by bribing jailers. The professor refutes this claim by saying that there is govermental document which proof that, after chevalier's escaped from the prison, they had to repair the ceiling of his prison and it shows that as he said in his notes, he really escaped from the prison from the roof. The professor also states that there were some people in that prison who had more powerful friends but could not escape from the prison by bribing the jailers, so it proves that chevalier could really escape from the prison by himself.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
...ly on all the expressed notes from his. on the other hand, the goes against three ...
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Line 4, column 641, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: not
... when they are out of cash, and it does not not mean they are not really wealthy. Se...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 7.30242825607 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 27.0 12.0772626932 224% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 61.0 22.412803532 272% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1820.0 1373.03311258 133% => OK
No of words: 385.0 270.72406181 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72727272727 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31601229922 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.431168831169 0.540411800872 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 419.366225166 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 21.2450331126 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.7123769957 49.2860985944 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.454545455 110.228320801 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.0 21.698381199 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06452816374 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304289109697 0.272083759551 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141338448088 0.0996497079465 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.194372046315 0.0662205650399 294% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177561570806 0.162205337803 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.240961330884 0.0443174109184 544% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.3589403974 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.87 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.0289183223 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.498013245 152% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.2008830022 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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