Modern life has become easier and the people of the world have to thanks to the immense contribution of technological innovation. Apart from transportation and communication, I personally feel that the internet is the most significant innovation on which we human being totally rely on. There are several significant benefits of the internet such as online communication, Internet banking, online shopping, online games, and online entertainment, etc. There are three reasons why I have this preference and I will explore the following points in my essay.
First of all, The internet is a backbone of the communication sector and it allows people to communicate with people in virtually any part of the world via emails, video conferencing and social networking sites, etc. There are convenient for everyone in the world. Even every company is using emails in business. The convenience of email has allowed the business to expand and communicate with their vendors and customer located all over the world. Moreover, personal communication has become easier. Applications like Facebook, Whatsapp, and skype configure with video calls. They are faster and easy to use. With the help of such services, it has become easy to establish a kind of global friends where we can share thoughts and explore the culture. Considering an example of my personal life, about six years ago, when I was in college. I used the internet and its facilities in many ways such as video conferencing with family, ordering food and internet banking.
Secondly, information is the biggest advantages that the internet offers. Any kind of information on any topic available on the internet. The search engines like google, yahoo are providing service through the internet. Besides that, it is very important for education. Many students go online in order to get study information such as study program, tuition information and to register for an exam. The internet provides fast response, save time, and cost-friendly.
Furthermore, entertainment is another popular reason why many people prefer to surf the internet. In fact, the internet provides all important resources for entertainment such as game, web series, educational video, and blogs, etc. Even celebrities are using the internet effectively for a promotional campaign. Besides that numerous free online game is available on the internet. Even, the internet brings the platform to many people to earn money. A platform like youtube gives the opportunity to showcase their talent.
In conclusion, the internet is as much as important as other technological resources. It is difficult to achieve further development without the internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 407, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tion, Internet banking, online shopping, online games, and online entertainment, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2268.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 420.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0205043804 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 733.5 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.4979441279 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.6045352989 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0933880510055 0.236089414692 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0257163029136 0.076458572812 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292538973748 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0521781969068 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295013146443 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.002688172 125% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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