TPO-01 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.Use specific reaso

I strongly believe that sports and social activities are as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Apart from education, sports, and social activities play an integral role in any person's personal and professional growth.

Although education can give you an academic advantage for choosing the desired career, social activities help you to acquire essential interpersonal skills. I have seen irrespective of excellence at work, people always correlate to your interpersonal skills in terms of, the ability to communicate, care, and show humanistic approach.

Additionally, it is quite possible that some people may be good at sports but they might not be aware of their hidden talent. Some of the successful sportsmen have a history of accidentally choosing sports as their career. Also, sports is a must for students to relax while struggling with their hectic academic syllabus. Sports and social activities can help students relax and rejuvenate, which in turn, increases their productivity and improves their performance.

Lastly, it is quite common people to suffer from depression due to urban lifestyles and nuclear families. Social activities help students to socialize especially the ones, who are away from their families living in the dormitories.

To conclude, I can say that Universities can play a major role in overall development of their college students by providing them equal access to sports and social activities it does to classes and libraries.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 127, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...ht not be aware of their hidden talent. Some of the successful sportsmen have a history of ...
^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, may, so, while, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1292.0 1977.66487455 65% => OK
No of words: 233.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.54506437768 4.8611393121 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96898319392 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 212.727598566 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596566523605 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7186857422 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.454545455 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1818181818 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207281718339 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875603452624 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106475203153 0.0737576698707 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119764571566 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749091405265 0.0645574589148 116% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 10.9000537634 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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