TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Certainly, some people if asked would agree with the statement that truth is most important consideration between people in any relationship. While, some of them says that it depends on various factors such as the intention of telling lies, the contest and the place whether it is necessary to hide the truth etc. As far as iam concerned, i take a firm position that telling truth is most important in any relationship mainly for the following reasons.
Telling truth makes other person to trust you and believe in your words when he is in a dilemma or a difficult situation.For example, i remember my friend Jacob made a notorious thing in the class and the teacher could not find the person who did the mischievous thing and she was very upset.He came near me to suggest because he trusts me and gave a suggestion to meet the teacher and confess the guilt. At first, he hesitated to face the teacher .But due to the trust he kept on me ,he met the teacher and the teacher accepted the apology. He was later happy that i guided him in the right way. He believes me because i always speak truth and he trusts me. If i would have cheated him in any case, he would never listen to my suggestions any time in future.
Speaking truth is very important in a relationship.Truth signifies the character in a person.For example, Once i told my father that i got better grade that the actual grade which i got. At the time of telling lies, i didnt think much about the consequences of telling the wrong grade. Our grade cards are given by the teachers to parents directly. So, my father took the grade card and the actual grade. He was actually more upset that i told lies to him. He was in a little bit of anger but he was more upset that his son told lies to him. So, i decided that i will speak truth always in my life .
However, some people argue that telling truth may not always help.For example, if we violate the traffic rules and immediately if a traffic police catches us and imposes a fine. Some people may say a health problem and escape the situation. But in the long run, they may face problems on or the other time. For example, my friend Roshan was caught by a traffic police and imposed a fine for not having a driving license. However, he said that he was in a hurry to meet one of his relatives in hospital as he was in a critical situation. But the truth is there was no medical emergency. He could escape the fine temporarily. But the same person was caught on the next day and the police imposed a fine double that of previous one. If he had paid the fine the previous day, he could have kept the driving license with him out of fear of losing money again. In this way, escaping from truth does not help.
Due to the above mentioned reasons, telling lies is most important in any relationship between people.Telling truth help you to develop as an individual as a whole with good qualities and we should not forget the phrase "Honesty is the best policy".

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Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'such as', 'in any case']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215946843854 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.166112956811 0.158761421928 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0797342192691 0.0866891130778 92% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0514950166113 0.046263068375 111% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0797342192691 0.0685040099705 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.121262458472 0.118717715034 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0348837209302 0.0351676179071 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54197407698 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0215946843854 0.0309702414327 70% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.117940199336 0.0887237588012 133% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0182724252492 0.0209618222197 87% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00498338870432 0.0139019557991 36% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3011.0 2387.08602151 126% => OK
No of words: 551.0 408.028673835 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46460980036 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84493438435 4.48200974243 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.274047186933 0.338922669872 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.194192377495 0.251872472559 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.116152450091 0.174417080927 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.070780399274 0.112833075102 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54197407698 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 256.0 212.727598566 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464609800363 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 55.0656050372 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6684587814 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.1923076923 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.6347729366 48.84282405 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.807692308 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1923076923 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.423076923077 0.644075263715 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.54480286738 541% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.6115454419 45.7405998639 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.25139664804 1.45489161554 86% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.424616896289 0.300154397459 141% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.128098908512 0.103427244359 124% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.131220211034 0.0752933317313 174% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.489473357249 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.179709870201 0.151897553556 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153825684977 0.114077575197 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0976951819989 0.0781384742642 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.346840497464 0.336927656856 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0724643537594 0.067059652881 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.313978112386 0.210909579961 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745152773404 0.0618886996521 120% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.86379928315 285% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 2.4623655914 284% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 18.0 13.6433691756 132% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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