Commitment is not as simple as we thought, it is complex which requires various elements to consider successful. In my opinion, trust is considered to be the most essential or integral part of everyone's relationship, considering it as the backbone, each couple must establish genuineness with their partner. I feel this way for 2 reasons which I will explore in in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, honesty makes relationship a stronger and sturdy mutual understanding, which is what everyone anticipate with their partners. Establishing rules like keeping a promise not to lie is usual thing for couple. Being true with each other builds trust, and if there is trust, one is certain that even they are afar or is in long distance relationship, they know that they can survive no matter what obstacles come in their way. Furthermore, they dont worry if their mate is with other people or interacting with the opposite gender since they already assured that none of them will make the first move to ruin their commitment. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I have a nine year relationship with my high school sweetheart, we were classmates back then but when we reach college we went to different city to study. We only see each other when we both go home to our hometown and that is only once in month. In addition, now we are in a long distance relationship since he is a seafarer and we know that they live more in the sea than in the land. So how do we able to make it through this way despite the distance? The answer is honesty- we promised to share everything, and that includes even the truth that can hurt us. As a result, we manage to conquer every dilemma we faced throughout this bumpy journey. Accordingly, I think that telling the truth makes the relationship survive.
Second, I believe truthfulness symbolizes love. It is just a simple understanding- how can you love someone when you are dishonest with him/her? If you adore and consider your spouse important in your life you would not dare to make him/her feel bad because of lies. People say that in order to know the genuine affection of your better half, look into their gestures. I think it is true, one way to show care is to let them feel love by means of assuring that your motive is true. As I said above, my boyfriend and I were together for long years, and what makes me think that he truly loves me is by showing that he put our relationship above all. He is consistent with being honest and always make sure that he do not hurt me of his actions or try to deceive me. With this, I can say that love blossoms where truth can be found.
Finally, verity shows faithfulness. When one is committed, he/she make sure that the loyalty is there, since no relationship would be at peace when cheating is happening. By just simply telling what is true couples already build a mutual trust with their mate. Moreover, by staying honest one can express that their intention is pure and they are serious when they decided to stay in the relationship.
All in all, I strongly believe that truth is the integral part of a relationship.I hope what I have stated above is enough to stand my view.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, i feel, i think, in addition, as a result, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 15.1003584229 245% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 27.0 11.0286738351 245% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 101.0 43.0788530466 234% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2627.0 1977.66487455 133% => OK
No of words: 570.0 407.700716846 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60877192982 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88617158649 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66132255367 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505263157895 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 816.3 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9659026148 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8214285714 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3571428571 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143601909459 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419891539237 0.076458572812 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326349131563 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753314931935 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287372546131 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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