Throughout history, society experienced drastic changes in the way of living; this is brought about by the imaginative minds of human being. While some thinks life now is easier compare to the time of our grandparents, other thinks that the present generation is more complicated to live on. In my opinion, the present condition of our living is way better and is advantageous than the situation before. I asset my view in 3 reasons and will illustrate then in the following
First of all, science has brought innovations that made people’s life a lot easier, such of this are equipments we use at home in everyday life. Through these inventions, we do not need to exert much effort in performing our jobs. Moreover, it allows us to do multitasking while finishing it up in a short period of time. In fact, most people are now dependent in using tools on everyday basis. Research even shows that almost everyone spent money to buy things which they think are useful at home and in the office. For instance, back when I was young, we used to cook our food using woods and I guarantee it is difficult and it consumes your time since you need to keep watching the fire to maintain the heat. But now we do have rice cooker and electric stove for preparing meals, by having these we do not need any more to stay in one place and wait until we finish cooking; also, we can do other things while the food is being prepared. For this reason, I cannot imagine life in the era where there are no innovations like what we have at the moment.
Second, people have no problem now to go from one place to another. We can travel anytime we want and anywhere we desire to since the availability of various transportation is smoothly accessible to everyone. There are buses, taxis, airplanes, and even ships to readily available for those who opt to navigate. The big difference of the current society is that these modes of transportation are now affordable for everybody. In contrast to the time of our grandparents, only those who are rich enough can indulge in this kind of pleasures. The experience of my grandmother is a compelling example of this, she said that before they need to trek for almost two hours just to rich the nearby town, and another two hours going home. Besides, although they want to visit their relative in other provinces they cannot seem to do it due to the fact that travelling cost is expensive. Accordingly, I believe that people greatly benefited to the improvement in the transportation.
Finally, we reach the time where technology dominates our life. Imagine the circumstances before where means of communication is only through ink and paper. Although this practice is still currently available, people seldom use it. Through cell phones, computers and telephones it is now effortless to deliver message or contact our love ones from afar. This is a great advantage especially to business since they can receive and convey information in a short span of time; we know every second is important for them to maintain operations on sites. For example, my grandfather told me that during their college days, it is hard for them to keep in touch with their family since they have to study away from their hometown. He said that if he wants to ask for allowance, he needs to do it a couple of weeks in advance because mail takes time to reach its destination. Thus, life now is incomparably smooth compare before.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that we are currently living on an era where science made our life easier in contrast to the situation of our grandparents in the previous decades. This because of innovations, accessible transportation and soaring technology.
- TPO-10 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 90
- TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO-02 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO-08 - Integrated Writing Task Toward the end of his life, the Chevalier de Seingalt (1725-1798) wrote a long memoir recounting his life and adventures. The Chevalier was a somewhat controversial figure, but since he met many famous people, including ki 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 312, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...asking while finishing it up in a short period of time. In fact, most people are now dependent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, finally, first, if, moreover, second, so, still, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, kind of, first of all, in contrast to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 15.1003584229 192% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 86.0 43.0788530466 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 102.0 52.1666666667 196% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3057.0 1977.66487455 155% => OK
No of words: 642.0 407.700716846 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76168224299 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.03365860172 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76707816952 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 330.0 212.727598566 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514018691589 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 982.8 618.680645161 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9724455196 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.413793103 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1379310345 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.48275862069 5.45110844103 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0938785879677 0.236089414692 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0228855910983 0.076458572812 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0287979963522 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564154768402 0.150856017488 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313905145125 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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