Recently , I noticed that more people think that telling lies would save them lots of troubles , ameliorate their picture in front others ,as well as provide them with good personal relationships .
I totally disagree with that opinion and I believe that although it is not always easy to tell the truth , it is always the right thing to do and being honest is the most important consideration in any relationship between people .
First of all , how can I trust a person who tells lies all the time or even one time ? I remember my father used to tell me that one ,needs a whole life to prove Himself as an honest individual and only one lie to show others that he is a liar and not a trustworthy .
As an example of how people can loose trust in someone after only one lie is what happened with my brother in his first engagement, he was engaged to his beautiful coworker with whome he lived the best love story and while preparing to the wedding , my brother wanted to spend time with his friends as a single and decided to join them camping . And because he thought his future wife would disagree because it was only three weeks before their wedding and they had so many stuff to prepare together , he came up with an idea of lying to her and he told her that our uncle died and he had to travel to attend his funeral . Few days after he went camping leaving his fiancée to finish preparing for the wedding herself , she met my mother at the mall and she was surprised of seeing her there and not attending her brother’s funeral and asked her about How she is dealing with the loss of her brother.
Needless to say , the beautiful bride to be ,found out that her fiancé was lying and she broke up with him only two weeks before the wedding stating that she lost her trust in him and that she would never marry a liar .
Second of all , lies will always be uncovered no matter how clever the liar is .
As the famous eastern proverb says :”lies have no legs .” And when lies get uncoverd , liar becomes very embarrassed and ashamed of himself .
A very famous example , is what happened to president Clinton after the scandal of Monika lweinisky , although president Clinton denied any physical contact or relation with miss Lowiniskee , at the end the truth found its way to the light leaving the president of America in huge sham , and I believe that was one of the reason his wife lost the presidential competition with Donald Trump in 2016 .
Finally , never think that telling lies will make you any benefit on the long run , and remember , being honest is the most important building block of a healthy strong relationship between people .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, so, well, while, as well as, first of all, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2176.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 478.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55230125523 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39384113965 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495815899582 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.1344086022 194% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.1201892496 48.9658058833 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.333333333 100.406767564 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.8333333333 20.6045352989 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.53405017921 198% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 39.0 5.5376344086 704% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142808148689 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065769520012 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088283390341 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809091291426 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0970563714946 0.0645574589148 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 11.7677419355 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 58.1214874552 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 10.1575268817 159% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.0537634409 175% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.247311828 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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