Now a days, Cars are one of the most essential things in our life specially in North America. It is essential to go to work,school or shopping. That is why i believe in 20 years there will be more cars than today specially with the high population growth. There are several reasons why i would agree with that opinion.
First, Car prices today is much lower than before. Now a days, almost every family can afford having at least one car. The reason for that is now we have many different car producers which create a competition environment which lower car prices over time.
Second, Cars are more convenient than public transportation as they are not available all the time plus waiting for the bus or the train might not be comfortable in very cold or very hot weather. I had a friend who wanted to take the bus to go to a job interview and the bus did not came due to maintenance issues which result in losing his job opportunity.
Finally, technology now a days will make more advanced cars with clean source of fuel to decrease air pollution. Also, i have read that they invented a flying car to reduce traffic and car accidents. I believe that we will have these clean advanced cars in the future with affordable prices for most of the people which will increase the number of cars in 20 years but hopefully with lower air pollution and car accidents.
In conclusion, cars are very important in our lives and i do not think we can give up cars even in 20 years, all what we need to work on is making advanced cars , more safe , more convenient and friendly to the environment.
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Essay evaluation report
The reason for that is now we have many different car producers
The reason for that is that now we have many different car producers
flaws:
No. of Words: 291 while No. of Different Words: 156
We are expecting:
No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 291 350
No. of Characters: 1264 1500
No. of Different Words: 156 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.13 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.344 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.385 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 72 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 45 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 35 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.385 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.201 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.538 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.363 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.643 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.125 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 2, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days, Cars are one of the most essential thi...
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Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
Now a days, Cars are one of the most essential thi...
^^^^^^
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , school
...h America. It is essential to go to work,school or shopping. That is why i believe in 2...
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Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to work,school or shopping. That is why i believe in 20 years there will be more ...
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Line 1, column 288, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n growth. There are several reasons why i would agree with that opinion. Fir...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s why i would agree with that opinion. First, Car prices today is much lower t...
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Line 3, column 53, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...prices today is much lower than before. Now a days, almost every family can afford having ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...es today is much lower than before. Now a days, almost every family can afford having ...
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Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to have'.
Suggestion: to have
... a days, almost every family can afford having at least one car. The reason for that i...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...car. The reason for that is now we have many different car producers which create a competitio...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
... to a job interview and the bus did not came due to maintenance issues which result ...
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Line 7, column 22, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...b opportunity. Finally, technology now a days will make more advanced cars with clean...
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Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...portunity. Finally, technology now a days will make more advanced cars with clean...
^^^^^^
Line 9, column 58, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ars are very important in our lives and i do not think we can give up cars even i...
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Line 9, column 162, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... need to work on is making advanced cars , more safe , more convenient and friendl...
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Line 9, column 174, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...k on is making advanced cars , more safe , more convenient and friendly to the env...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'at least', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24126984127 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.149206349206 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0984126984127 0.0866891130778 114% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0793650793651 0.046263068375 172% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0380952380952 0.0685040099705 56% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0984126984127 0.118717715034 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0190476190476 0.0351676179071 54% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51072011958 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.031746031746 0.0309702414327 103% => OK
Particles: 0.0031746031746 0.00188951952338 168% => OK
Determiners: 0.0793650793651 0.0887237588012 89% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0253968253968 0.0209618222197 121% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0253968253968 0.0139019557991 183% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1600.0 2387.08602151 67% => OK
No of words: 292.0 408.028673835 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47945205479 5.86048508987 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.48200974243 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.253424657534 0.338922669872 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.167808219178 0.251872472559 67% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.13698630137 0.174417080927 79% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0993150684932 0.112833075102 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51072011958 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530821917808 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 53.6711458617 59.2087087015 91% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 22.4615384615 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0427855339 48.84282405 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.076923077 120.699889404 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.692307692308 0.644075263715 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.54480286738 289% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 39.2423603793 45.7405998639 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.34523809524 1.45489161554 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298049753624 0.300154397459 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106081206747 0.103427244359 103% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0773652425487 0.0752933317313 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.592642265818 0.497263757937 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.183468888667 0.151897553556 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117108070058 0.114077575197 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772591731171 0.0781384742642 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.150101452549 0.336927656856 45% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0717716750044 0.067059652881 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179314885672 0.210909579961 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892053882666 0.0618886996521 144% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8870967742 50% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 8.42114695341 71% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 13.6433691756 81% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.