Internet has made our life easier than before. It provides us with a lot of valuable information, Although some people think that access to much information can creates problems. I disagree with that opinion because i think internet has added many useful things to our life for the following reasons.
First, One of the things that Internet has made it easier for us is searching for jobs. Back in the days people used to search for jobs through newspaper or by asking their friends. Today you can know about all the jobs available anywhere you want through the internet which makes searching for jobs more convenient and gives the person more variety of jobs. furthermore, If a person liked a job in a different town or even a different country they can apply and do the interview online before moving to the new place.
Second, Another useful thing in the internet is the reviews. people today can read reviews from other people on anything such as restaurants, products, machines or electronics. Now you get to know about other personal experiences with a specific product, about the quality or about the life time of that product before buying it, this helps people to make an informed decisions.
Third, Internet has made all the information in all aspects of life available to anyone. Back in the days people used to search for books but today you can get any book or any information you want through the internet. This amazing feature of the internet has a negative side which is some people rely on the internet in critical situations such as illness rather than going to seek professional attention that is why people should be careful about the source of information they receive.
In conclusion, Internet has some risks in addition to its benefits, that is why people should pay attention to the source of information they are getting. But, in my opinion there are more benefits than risks regarding the internet. benefits that make people's life easier and increase their knowledge.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: It provides us with a lot of valuable information, Although some people think that access to much information can creates problems.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a verb, present tense, 3rd person singular
Suggestion: Refer to can and creates
flaws:
No. of Different Words: 166 200
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 340 350
No. of Characters: 1623 1500
No. of Different Words: 166 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.294 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.774 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.456 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 118 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 28 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.154 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.202 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.692 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.405 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.658 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.195 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'create'
Suggestion: create
...ink that access to much information can creates problems. I disagree with that opinion ...
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Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s. I disagree with that opinion because i think internet has added many useful th...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to our life for the following reasons. First, One of the things that Internet ...
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
... gives the person more variety of jobs. furthermore, If a person liked a job in a different...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...l thing in the internet is the reviews. people today can read reviews from other peopl...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...product, about the quality or about the life time of that product before buying it, this ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'decision'?
Suggestion: decision
..., this helps people to make an informed decisions. Third, Internet has made all the i...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 235, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Benefits
...fits than risks regarding the internet. benefits that make peoples life easier and incre...
^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'regarding', 'second', 'so', 'third', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.271739130435 0.229887763892 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.149456521739 0.158761421928 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0815217391304 0.0866891130778 94% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0190217391304 0.046263068375 41% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.054347826087 0.0685040099705 79% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133152173913 0.118717715034 112% => OK
Participles: 0.0326086956522 0.0351676179071 93% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.54642024328 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0298913043478 0.0309702414327 97% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.108695652174 0.0887237588012 123% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0190217391304 0.0209618222197 91% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0190217391304 0.0139019557991 137% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2011.0 2387.08602151 84% => OK
No of words: 340.0 408.028673835 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.91470588235 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48200974243 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.355882352941 0.338922669872 105% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.252941176471 0.251872472559 100% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.188235294118 0.174417080927 108% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0970588235294 0.112833075102 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54642024328 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494117647059 0.524397521467 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.0540503544 59.2087087015 86% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6684587814 77% => OK
Sentence length: 21.25 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2437496527 48.84282405 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.6875 120.699889404 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.5533526081 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8125 0.644075263715 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.54480286738 144% => OK
Readability: 46.5441176471 45.7405998639 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.96341463415 1.45489161554 135% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36731638587 0.300154397459 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.144132447039 0.103427244359 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0966094938499 0.0752933317313 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.564863148885 0.497263757937 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.127616349942 0.151897553556 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141086990797 0.114077575197 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10806002188 0.0781384742642 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.316930831467 0.336927656856 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0792974483565 0.067059652881 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240697229082 0.210909579961 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832776527011 0.0618886996521 135% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.