TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

i disagree with this statement that life today is easier than it was when our grandparents were children. i think life in those days was much comfortable. i explain my opinion with these three factors : stress, technology , pollution

first, in our grandparents life they were not worry about anything that we are. in life today we should hurry because of the famous sentence "time is gold " . today work life has been changed to a office working in contradictory with their working life . they mostly were farmer, had a small shop or provided a service to the neighbors. now we as an employee in a company should be at work at 8 o'clock. after 5 p.m we should hurry to get our children from school, do shopping , making dinner and so on. i think this type of life make people in this era stressful and it is not convenient.

second, the growth of technology is a reason that people feel less comfortable than our grandparents did. at this time i am writing about this topic, a new device should be invented and we must learn how to use that and make ourselves informed about that. because of this growth pace in technology people are being behind of that always , although their life is integrated with that technology. they always face a new mobile device, new car generation, new banking system and they are overwhelmed with device instructions.

finally, our life has a worse quality in comparison to our grandparents'. pollution is a concern in present time forcing governments hold annual conventions . this pollution increase death by cancer or heart attack . in our grandparents' life they were not facing with medical problems as much as we are. pollution has been resulted by growth of technology, factories, global warming and desertification.
according to above reasons, i think life today, with all factors relating to easiness, is less comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children.

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Discourse Markers used:
['finally', 'first', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'i think', 'in my opinion']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.275956284153 0.229887763892 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.169398907104 0.158761421928 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0628415300546 0.0866891130778 72% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0382513661202 0.046263068375 83% => OK
Pronouns: 0.068306010929 0.0685040099705 100% => OK
Prepositions: 0.125683060109 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0437158469945 0.0351676179071 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85658274143 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0191256830601 0.0309702414327 62% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0737704918033 0.0887237588012 83% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0136612021858 0.0209618222197 65% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0109289617486 0.0139019557991 79% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1930.0 2387.08602151 81% => OK
No of words: 332.0 408.028673835 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81325301205 5.86048508987 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33734939759 0.338922669872 100% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.237951807229 0.251872472559 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.16265060241 0.174417080927 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114457831325 0.112833075102 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85658274143 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524096385542 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 55.0116460849 59.2087087015 93% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.4736842105 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9422088958 48.84282405 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.578947368 120.699889404 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.5533526081 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.368421052632 0.644075263715 57% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.54480286738 685% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 41.2688649334 45.7405998639 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.61386138614 1.45489161554 111% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272156380692 0.300154397459 91% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0544042852173 0.103427244359 53% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0451736422856 0.0752933317313 60% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.463554414039 0.497263757937 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.150148205884 0.151897553556 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988686157012 0.114077575197 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893181563 0.0781384742642 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.212195439409 0.336927656856 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0501288425323 0.067059652881 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198840076198 0.210909579961 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830016825491 0.0618886996521 134% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8870967742 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.86379928315 155% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.91756272401 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.4623655914 203% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.75985663082 145% => OK
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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