There many controversial issues between researchers specially in human resource management which resulted in employees satisfaction and company turnover. There is a debate between high level managers that workers will be pleased with doing different types of tasks or similar tasks during the day. I think managers should assign diverse duties to their staff in order to increase their happiness and I explain my opinion in following reasons.
First of all, in recent years many essays have been published to teach persons who direct the organizations and one of their instructions is job description designing. The researches say the satisfaction of employees has dependency to how their job portfolio is complete and varied. For example managers should review all the job descriptions in ending of the year and redesging the types which are very simple and lack of diversity.
Secondly, most of persons work to be happy in their life and it could be happen for many people when they are efficient to their cooperate. Surveys indicate people with one routine task do not feel they are very essential to their group and the solution is making their activities different from each other. For instance a typist who conduct typing every day may think every body can do his or her job easily while multiple jobs decrease this disappointing feeling.
Furthermore, human being has a strong passion and enthusiasm to playing games and puzzles because they can think in these games and due to some chemical processes they will have sweet status in result. Making job category varied causes problem solving process for staff and they counter many enigmas in their daily professional life and solving them make them joyful of work. For example an operator with boring reaepted job knows every aspects of his job and this is not any challenge for him whereas people love competition and challenging.
In conclusion, all companies should try to enhance quality of jobs by adding differentiation to them and plan many programs to improve this factor in a long-term progress. Particularly in new modern industries simplification of job has a harmful effect on people's spirit.
- TPO-11 - Integrated Writing Task A recent study reveals that people especially young people are reading far less literature,novels, plays, and poems,than they used to. This is troubling because the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public, for 88
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- TPO-34 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.U 76
- Some people think that family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence in young adults. Which view do you agree with? Use examples to support your position. 73
- TPO 42- Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 35
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the persons') or simply say ''most persons''.
Suggestion: most of the persons; most persons
...ple and lack of diversity. Secondly, most of persons work to be happy in their life and it c...
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Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'causes'' or 'cause's'?
Suggestion: causes'; cause's
...s in result. Making job category varied causes problem solving process for staff and t...
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Line 9, column 101, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f jobs by adding differentiation to them and plan many programs to improve this f...
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Line 9, column 152, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'long-term progress'.
Suggestion: long-term progress
...many programs to improve this factor in a long-term progress. Particularly in new modern industries ...
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Line 9, column 201, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'industries'' or 'industry's'?
Suggestion: industries'; industry's
...rm progress. Particularly in new modern industries simplification of job has a harmful eff...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1821.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15864022663 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75715264615 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597733711048 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 554.4 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 24.5885530029 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 130.071428571 100.406767564 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2142857143 20.6045352989 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7857142857 5.45110844103 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191221867098 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652701270573 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705343726076 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101740402979 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484563774263 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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