Beyond doubt, life today is much easier and more comfortable than it was when my grandparents were children. The recent developments in modes of transportation and communication have drastically improved our lifestyles.
At the time, when my grandparents were young kids, they had to travel by buses who used to take people just twice from their village to the nearest city. My grandparents tell me the story how they had a grand celebration when the village head got his bicycle. In fact, that was the only bicycle in the whole village in their times. On the other, today each home has at least two to three cars. Kids get their first ride on the cycles in the school days itself. In addition, the long distance between two provinces can be covered in hours by an aeroplane, which used to take days in their times by trains.
Also, in my grandparent's childhood days, the only means of communication used to be telegrams and letters. Even the landlines came when my parents were teens. Today we have faster and easily means of communication in the form of mobiles and computers. Computers indeed are the best modes of communication it helps us to visually communicate our near and dear ones who might be sitting far away from us in altogether a different country.
In my grandparents times, there were no online banking services due to which they had to stand in long queues to pay their monthly electricity bills. Today, all banking is just a click away. Life today is easier due to advanced technology. The temperature of the homes can be maintained according to weather. The efficient heating and cooling services are readily available in the form Air-conditioners and heating systems. Whereas in my grandparent's times, they had to cope up with extremes of weather by natural ways like shades provided by trees in summers and heat by a fireplace.
To summarize, I would say technology has made our life much easier as well as comfortable than what it used to a century ago.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 68, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...echnology has made our life much easier as well as comfortable than what it used t...
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Line 12, column 91, Rule ID: AS_ADJ_AS[1]
Message: Comparison is written "as comfortable 'as'".
Suggestion: as
...life much easier as well as comfortable than what it used to a century ago.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, well, whereas, at least, in addition, in fact, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83397900898 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9868568894 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10526315789 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161544776609 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532543985993 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757045237814 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107853551525 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672136683586 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.