As the earth gets older, so does man and science. It is observable to say that life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children, as they didn't have the easy going lifestyle that we have now. I support this statement for reasons such as the improvement in technology and its inventions, and medical health facilities provided now.
Patently, it is seen that appliances, equipments and tools used in our grandparents' time is nothing compared to what we have now.Ranging from home, work, lifestyle; our day to day activities is, if i may say, 'tech-touched'.For instance, an architect no longer have to spend strenuous hours sketching or measuring his ideas on paper when he can just use a 3d graphic design interface that can bring his imagination into life, we no longer have to walk miles away from our home just to call or send letters to our loved ones when we could just easily use social-networking apps on a palm-sized phone, coffee no longer have to manually grinded to make into powder when we could coffee machines that gives us coffee in just few minutes.All this has made life easier and comfortable now , unlike in our grandparents' time when these inventions were not available for them,just imagine life back then without a colored television or a phone.
Moreover, people are living longer and healthier nowadays compared our grandparents' generation. Improved medical facilities as well as drugs and medicines has been provided to make health condition better. My grandmother once told me that she lost a younger sister to hepatitis and if her sister had lived just a little longer she would have been rid of hepatitis forever. Imagine how many poor souls and loved ones have lost their lives to a disease whose cure and medicine is even sold in street chemist shops. So many people are living with hepatitis today but they are living longer, some even get old and die with it. This could only be possible because of the medical facilities and drugs we have now that could even cure rare diseases or ailments.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: "Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.” 76
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, even so, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 354.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85593220339 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72401794326 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581920903955 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.94265232975 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.1344086022 174% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 245.208074908 48.9658058833 501% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 171.9 100.406767564 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.4 20.6045352989 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12110511754 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480950448061 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709425016071 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106007682707 0.150856017488 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788457562159 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 11.7677419355 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.1575268817 156% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.0537634409 159% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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