There is a endless debate about whether people can more benefited by traveling own country or more benefited by foreign country. In my opinion traveling to own country is a ceaseless treasure to know something a quick glance of time. I feel this way in which I will explore in the following essay.
Firstly travelling through the own country is easy way of gathering knowledge. Travelling is the best and pragmatic source of getting knowledge. So as knowledge gather should be in an flexible manner and a smooth way, it should be start from the country. Because in the country there is some benefits such as linguistic benefit, home country benefit, environmental suiting benefit. All together the traveling is in a smooth way. My own traveling experience is a compelling one. During my university life I along with of my friend are try to visit the sea beach which is the largest sea beach of the country. As bangladeshi we always talk in our mother language and there we donot have any problem. But we found some tourist there who are from U.K, are always with the interpreter and without the help of interpreter they cannot conduct anything. As a result what the interpreter says they have to feel that is correct. As a result there is lack chance of getting natural knowledge.
Secondly, the cost of travel is an important factor. As student life is the perfect time for traveling whether no other time can be manageable for traveling. In this time exploring is perfect because this time mind is so fastidious to know about new thing. However in that time money stands upon on exploring. So that would be wise decision to have a tour in the country which can be done with the budget. A personal example prove this point successfully. During my student life I fully depend upon part time job. There is little amount of money will I deposit in the bank for my yearly tour. so at the winter vacation it does not so much to have a foreign trip. so with my limited cost I can learn knowledge with exploring the countryside.
Finally, the environment of the country is good reason during the visit. All country environment is not good for exploring. As I am living in hot country weather, it would be hard for me to stay and explore knowledge by visiting the cold country weather. So ultimate success of traveling is to gather knowledge will not be achievable.
In conclusion I can say that traveling is important for to refresh mind and come back to job with a full vigor. But easy way of knowledge and cost effective journey can be possible only by home country traveling.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Consider replacing "in an flexible manner" with adverb for "flexible"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ledge. So as knowledge gather should be in an flexible manner and a smooth way, it should be start fr...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ge. So as knowledge gather should be in an flexible manner and a smooth way, it sh...
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Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'started'?
Suggestion: started
...e manner and a smooth way, it should be start from the country. Because in the countr...
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Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some benefits'?
Suggestion: there are some benefits
...rom the country. Because in the country there is some benefits such as linguistic benefit, home countr...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a smooth way" with adverb for "smooth"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... benefit. All together the traveling is in a smooth way. My own traveling experience is a compe...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...terpreter they cannot conduct anything. As a result what the interpreter says they...
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...says they have to feel that is correct. As a result there is lack chance of gettin...
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...at time money stands upon on exploring. So that would be wise decision to have a tour i...
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Suggestion: part-time
...ing my student life I fully depend upon part time job. There is little amount of money wi...
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Suggestion: So
...deposit in the bank for my yearly tour. so at the winter vacation it does not so m...
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...ter vacation it does not so much to have a foreign trip. so with my limited cost ...
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...es not so much to have a foreign trip. so with my limited cost I can learn knowle...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2129.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66885964912 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64402666413 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458333333333 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 672.3 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4971733491 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.9666666667 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192982303495 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538359592768 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535007567976 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121647249177 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671814075384 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 86.8835125448 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.