There is no shortage of doubt that whether playing a computer game is important or it is harmful. In my opinion playing computer game in child age bring is less beneficial and cause some serious defects. I feel this way for several reasons which I will explore in the following essays.
Firstly, Gaming is the loss of time. Time is precious to all and every child should have to learn this from the very beginning of their life. Child time is to get acquire the basic knowledge and if one cannot get this he is sure will be lag behind in today's race. My life experience is a compelling one. My nephew and niece who are very fond of computer gaming and according to their wish they are given computer as their birthday gift. So all the time they are immerse in computer which had a bad impact to their study. So after two or three years family come to understand their academic grades are poor and they have a less knowledge in basic science. So it is obvious that computer games deteriorate the potency of acquiring knowledge perfectly.
Secondly, Computer games make children less social. When it is time for children to play in field they spent time in computer gaming. Outdoor game means there is a lots of friends and there is a lots of interaction. Computer snatch this interaction from the young people. Some time guardian think that it is good that if child go for outside there is chance of exploitation where they feel their child should stay home and play computer game. A personal example prove this point. A child of my colleague who are always in computer game.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'immersed'.
Suggestion: immersed
...birthday gift. So all the time they are immerse in computer which had a bad impact to t...
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Line 3, column 621, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[4]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'less knowledge'.
Suggestion: less knowledge
... academic grades are poor and they have a less knowledge in basic science. So it is obvious that...
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Line 3, column 656, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...have a less knowledge in basic science. So it is obvious that computer games deter...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are a lots'?
Suggestion: there are a lots
... in computer gaming. Outdoor game means there is a lots of friends and there is a lots of inter...
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Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...ter gaming. Outdoor game means there is a lots of friends and there is a lots of inter...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are a lots'?
Suggestion: there are a lots
...me means there is a lots of friends and there is a lots of interaction. Computer snatch this in...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
...there is a lots of friends and there is a lots of interaction. Computer snatch this in...
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Line 5, column 538, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...league who are always in computer game.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, i feel, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 284.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56690140845 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37102071654 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517605633803 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4022876096 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0555555556 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.45110844103 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199539378285 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715280325642 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471476595137 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154245826096 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045067088122 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 86.8835125448 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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