There has been much discussion revolving around the topic of whether traveling in your own country is more beneficial than traveling abroad or not. In my consideration, most of the people enjoy travelling because of the new experience and explorations. Therefore, journeys in the foreign counties are more preferable and beneficial in comparison with the trips around your own country. I will explain my position providing the examples to support my point of view.
First of all, exploring different nationalities and traditions provides valuable experience and broadens the mind. I consider that investigation of the new cultures is a captivating engagement, whan you are able to see with your own eyes places with the tremendous historical background and to study this history on the life examples.
Secondly, during the journey, it is possible to make new friends and improve language skills. I truly support the idea that fluent language skills possible to aquire only in the foreign enviroment. A good example of that is international language schools, which are directed to improve you speaking skills and to find new friends during journey to the foreign country. Accordingly, international collaborations not only intervened you in the foreign world, but also provide you with a solid language skills. On the other hand, it is really hard to find such experience while you are traveling in your own country.
Finally, while traveling we are putting ourselves is the unusual situation, and it has positive influence on our feelings. A striking example of that is when during some misfortunes and depressions people are usually desire to change the situation and to take a brake from the prussure of reality. When we are arriving to foreign country we can feel freedom and calmness inside due to the positive emotioness and relaxing atmosphere of the new place, it is seems to us that all the worries are left behind. Thus, some phsycologists recommend their patients to travel a lot as a good medicine againt depressions.
To wrap up, I suppose that journeys around the world are beneficial for our mind and soul, providing us with the novel adventures and wonderful acquaintances. I hope that the examples given above have sufficiently expressed my opinion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, finally, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, i suppose, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1911.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 367.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20708446866 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98688812014 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536784741144 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 598.5 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9574849195 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.411764706 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5882352941 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254061702448 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739641073598 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050207035637 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122789899027 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622722227183 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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