TPO 14 task 2

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TPO 14 task 2

In this ameliorate and intricate world, in all progressive societies, traveling and visiting is one ‎of the most pivotal requirements for human beings which should be fulfilled to improve life. ‎This will be satisfied during travel different places inside or outside one's country. While many ‎people hold the idea that it is beneficial trip to a foreign country to spend time, others believe ‎that traveling inside one's country benefits him or her. As far as I am concerned, I agree with ‎the latter prospect and prefer to travel in my own country. I feel this way as my reasons ‎elaborated upon hereunder to corroborate my point of view. ‎

What tops the chart, people by traveling through their own country can save money, which can ‎be dedicated to spend on other needs of the travel. As far as anyone knows, traveling other ‎countries require a large amount of money for ticket and side expenses. However, one by ‎visiting and travelling through his or her country can easily afford the expenses and spend his ‎or her money on the interests. To be more specified, an example can clearly demonstrate this ‎idea. Last summery, my family decided to go on a two week trip to one of the beautiful ‎countries in the east of Asia. We were five people, when we tried to take tickets, we shocked ‎surprisingly. The prices were so unaffordable which we canceled the trip and we reached the ‎agreement that went on a two week inside trip to see the beautiful places in some central and ‎southern provinces of our own country, Iran. Going on a trip with personal car saves many of ‎costs you should pay the local for transporting. For example we easily could visit any places we ‎wanted with no excess cost and also we were enjoyably free to go wherever we wanted. So, ‎traveling inside the country brings us some lucrative advantages. ‎

Equally important, people by spending their money inside their own country can help the ‎economy thrive which brings them more and more advantages. Going on a trip inside country, ‎helps local people to sell their handicrafts and local products, which government can put some ‎taxes on the products and spend the revenues to supply more facilities which it helps people to ‎have more fun and memorable trip. For example, my aunt lives in a beautiful village which ‎every year attracts many people from inside and outside the country to visit there. There a ‎numerous handicrafts and local cloths which they sell. The authorities enacted rules which ‎helped the locale to benefits more from their selling. As a result of those taxes, some new ‎parking lots were prepared and makes it easier to enjoy their trip. ‎

In conclusion, by taking into account all aforementioned reasons and examples, I strongly ‎believe that people by traveling through their own home-country can gain some benefits. This ‎is because travelling inside the country, not only needs a low budget and affordable for most ‎people but also helps the local people to get some benefits and the government will be ‎benefited, as well. ‎

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
...gs us some lucrative advantages. ‎ Equally important, people by spending their mon...
^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, while, for example, i feel, in conclusion, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2603.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 518.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0250965251 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74385112777 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509652509653 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 783.0 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5498283936 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.173913043 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5217391304 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82608695652 5.45110844103 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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