To agree or disagree with the following statement that the best way of travel is in a group with the tour guide is a matter of balancing its pros and cons. However if one considers the following reasons; he or she may disagree with the title of statement as I do. I will explain my position providing the examples to support my point of view.
First of all, you won’t have any freedom in your transportations during a holiday trip. Although, a lot of people conversely prefer to travel by the strict route because they don’t want to miss any famous sightseeings. In my pertheption, when you are on a holidays, it’s better just to relax and enjoy your surroundings than to run around the city in a speed of light in order to see every street of a city. In other words, you can make your own plan of excurtions, read about popular places in advance or take guide tour particular for a one sightseeing. In the lights of the above, I gather say that not all the people will enjoy the saturated program of the group tours.
Secondly, traveling in a group with other people could be uncomfortable for people who choose rather to travel individually. Speaking personally, I am a person who prefer to travel alone, but once I had an experience of traveling in Rome for a few days with the tour guide. Some of the people in my group was noisy and hasty, another part was the slowly and dissatisfied old people. Therefore, part-time of the excurtion we were in a hurry and another part we were waiting for the people lagging behind. In such sutiation it was extremely hard to concentrate on the beauty of Rome and on antient sculptures and buildings. To recapitulate, experience of exploring the Rome with the banch of people wasn’t the best travel that I had in my life.
To wrap up, I suppose that there are a lot of people who prefer to travel only in a big groups with a tour guide, but unfortunately I am not one of them. So to say, there are disadvantages and advantages of everything created on earth. It depends on human being to utilize or exploit them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... matter of balancing its pros and cons. However if one considers the following reasons;...
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Line 3, column 265, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a holiday' or simply 'holidays'?
Suggestion: a holiday; holidays
...ngs. In my pertheption, when you are on a holidays, it's better just to relax and enj...
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Line 3, column 572, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... tour particular for a one sightseeing. In the lights of the above, I gather say t...
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Line 5, column 275, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...ome for a few days with the tour guide. Some of the people in my group was noisy and hasty,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, i suppose, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 376.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53723404255 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.784832285 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529255319149 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8105603727 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.352941176 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24627914466 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736846960328 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825214225631 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156293261814 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999090931622 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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